BReAK DoWN


Optimized verse

i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat
sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets
ok line i guess...6/10
you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard
papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more
minore improvement...6/10
the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft
dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft
weak....4/10
take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more
so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store
nice attemp of a metaphore....5/10
so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply
my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs
pretty beat finisher......7/10

Overall=28/50



Intensify effect's verse

im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya
trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop
kinda soft.......5/10
u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat
cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth
real weak.....4/10
its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM
and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame
kinda corny but the AIM was ok....6/10
change ya name im here to change ya fame
with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games
nice metaphore attempt 6/10
and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this
cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive
good finisher....8/10

Overall=29/50

Vote: Intensify effect