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Old 08-30-04, 04:36 PM   #1
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Father Feeble 0-0 vs pictureperfect2 0-0

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Read.

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Old 08-30-04, 05:13 PM   #2
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good lookin, check.......... yo how many lines u wanna go kid. i say 12 max, u bout that?
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Old 08-30-04, 08:09 PM   #3
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sure .
 
Old 08-31-04, 03:03 AM   #4
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pictureperfects my bitch, this slaves in fact amusing..
cuz not even Jesus Christ could savior ass from losing ..
your a fucking loser at best, and a herb at most
newb's rocking a signature that says "return the vote!"
pick another to cross, cuz i've got others to boss
& maybe u should put a blanket on ur verse to cover ur loss
he dont know good wordplay, im defeatin this drunk head
people read ya shit, and come with sheets N a bunk bed
i'll win this easily, and finally im confessing it hoe..
only thing u push around contains ur possessions and clothes
 
Old 08-31-04, 03:18 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Father Feeble
Rofl , regardless if i recycle one concept or not.

#1^^^^

fuck this lyricist, he just came here to complain and lounge
dont call this biters drop a verse, but RB's lost and found#1
i say fuck a verse with out smooth flow-so i wont respect his
dont go by what i think, its shown in his(sig),Wins:is Reckless
ff's just a bitch who's frontin, so u can expect real-fake mixtures
closes u come to a real rapper is-how your pussin(pushin) up figures
your just a bitch/snitch talkin tough shit behind his alias
run this back,why u so good? cuz u complain,50 times w/e day it is?
writin your name and password in this site is your only text well done
cuz HERE we only accept the best, and that will be your only welcome


WHAT?............FUCK YOU
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Old 09-01-04, 05:26 PM   #6
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pictureperfects my bitch, this slaves in fact amusing..
cuz not even Jesus Christ could savior ass from losing ..
nice opener.

your a fucking loser at best, and a herb at most
newb's rocking a signature that says "return the vote!"
basic but it was good.

pick another to cross, cuz i've got others to boss
& maybe u should put a blanket on ur verse to cover ur loss
nice.

he dont know good wordplay, im defeatin this drunk head
people read ya shit, and come with sheets N a bunk bed
ha

i'll win this easily, and finally im confessing it hoe..
only thing u push around contains ur possessions and clothes
dope.

I liked the wordplay from ur verse. Not much personals but it was a solid verse, weaker than what ive read of ures before but good.

fuck this lyricist, he just came here to complain and lounge
dont call this biters drop a verse, but RB's lost and found#1
he didnt bite. he recycled.

i say fuck a verse with out smooth flow-so i wont respect his
dont go by what i think, its shown in his(sig),Wins:is Reckless
seriously what?

ff's just a bitch who's frontin, so u can expect real-fake mixtures
closes u come to a real rapper is-how your pussin(pushin) up figures
not liking.

your just a bitch/snitch talkin tough shit behind his alias
run this back,why u so good? cuz u complain,50 times w/e day it is?
nah

writin your name and password in this site is your only text well done
cuz HERE we only accept the best, and that will be your only welcome
weak.

seriously it wasnt good. Feeble didnt even put much effort if im comparing to other battles yet he clearly won.

vote feeble
 
Old 09-01-04, 05:41 PM   #7
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feeble - tight verse with some funny lines n gud wordplay...opener was original so o.k and closer was real dope, liked alot, all ya lines were gud so overall solid verse!!! not ya best but still easily gud enough....

7.5/10

PP - wasn't feeling this dawg, opener...nah he recycled didnt bite so a wasted line with no point to it, n the rest was pretty weak a few o.k punches but u can come beta than this....disapointing....pz

5.5/10

feeble just to original n had beta punches.....
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I'ma give this one to Feeble 'cuz he came with harder punches. Right out the gate I was feelin' his verse. Pic I've always enjoyed peepin' your battles, but on this one your punches kinda fell short. Did you underestimate him? 'Cuz I've seen you come a lot harder in the past. No hate though, keep bangin'...
Vote - Feeble, for harder punches and all around good wordplay.
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Old 09-01-04, 10:33 PM   #9
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feeble is god

hands down

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Old 09-02-04, 12:25 AM   #10
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vote feeble
he had more wittier punches,and funnier ones also,both structures were okay,the flow was nice...feeble had great flow,and over all owned this battle

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Old 09-03-04, 12:24 AM   #11
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My Vote Goes To Feeble...
His Punches Were Played-Out Harder...
The Structure Was In Place & Not Strected-Out...
Tha Flow Was Pretty Nice...
So Feeble Gets My Vote...
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Old 09-06-04, 03:37 AM   #12
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wtf is wrong with Valor's post?
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Old 09-06-04, 12:56 PM   #13
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yeah his was wittier but i coulda came wit all my prewriten shit like he did and came witty too. but personals i thought counted for sumin,. CHECK THE LINKS.
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Old 09-06-04, 05:02 PM   #14
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