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Old 09-02-04, 12:09 PM   #1
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grow up

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I’m a low life hustler cautious at every turn/ grew up with 1 symbol to live life and learn/ if you want to do things you got to be all work and no play/ this rapper this man is going his own way/ so don’t sit down get up for the matter/ don’t be a pussy dogg be a rapper!/ this lil chubs C-H-U-B-S/ I know I aint the best ok I confess/ some people call me good but I’m working for the greatest/ and I might not be the best but I still made it/ you don’t got to rap to grow up famous/ and me lil chubs is proud to be Caucasian/ some people famous for diamonds gold and bitches/ but I put down the riches and came in it for the spittin/ and I’m for real, not trying to impress my fans/ I grew up fucked up was a boy, now a man/
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Old 09-02-04, 12:10 PM   #2
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its one verse tell me what you think
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Old 09-02-04, 12:14 PM   #3
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shit was pretty hot...you need to work on keepin every line the same length...but it was good...7/10 dawg good job
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