Voted For: Wrecker

wreker took this...was better...had punches...personals...multies...and the structure was hella wierd...but i got it...it had good flow to...dollar...u just need to get more creative...both can elevate...vote wreker

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Voted For: Wrecker

u took this with better vocab, word play and multies...it also had good flow, harder punches and better personals...you both came at each other...just wreker came harder...both of you can elevate alot...be more creative wit ure shit...vote wreker...just was over all better

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uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and i'll return the favor

vote up and i'll return the favor just let me know who ya battling

Voted For: Wrecker

blah one sided battle
wrecker... you elevated yo yours was veryy good and killed all of j dlooars verse ya had nice personalds nice punches though ya flow and structre wasnt that good

J: yours was basic no hard hitting shit all basic and it was plain wack try harder

Vote: Wrecker

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

honestly, you are a fuckin newbie herb bitch who can't take critisicm.. and i'll battle you any time, you suck, and ask anyone on here, they'll tell you that i'm better than you.. plus you have a couple of d/r votes, they don't even explain bitch, so get a life you internet nerd..

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what the fuck is this? now that's a D/R vote, atleast i explained why J Dollar merked you in more than 2 lines.. haha, u suck ass..

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Voted For: Wrecker

Wrecker gets my vote..structure was good..tha punches were harder than's J Dollar that's what basically Wrecker took this one..

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how come all of my votes have been taken away..i've had like 6 votes, thats wack..ssome of them had good feedback, it doesnt take an essay to give feedback!!..

thats wack, he got two votes overall and got one taken away and i got like 6-7 and all of them got taken away..

payday, paramik, and lyrical all had good explanations and thats only on the second page..

can we get some explained votes, dont sleep on this..

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Voted For: Wrecker

flow: wrecker
punches: wrecker by far each line was slick and hot
wordplay: wrecker
creativeness: wrecker

Call Me Memph Bleek Coz Battlin Wreck?|..Ye Not Seen Round Here..|N Yell Get Left Wit A Loss|*lost*|Boy Like Mr Cheeks
JDollar Beatin Me? |..Is Plain Blasphemy..|Coz Wen Movin Microwaves To Kitchens Is The Only Time This Kids Packin Heat*
Swearin Ye Nyce But On Da Reel Kid|..I've Seen Ye Writtens,And They Suck..|Like A Vaccum Cleanin Device, N Yea Ur Gay
Its Like Test Drivin Downhill |..Coz Elevation Isn't Geared Ya Way..|N Ye Only Goin From Bottom To Top On Opposites Day
Reachin Me??..You're Not Elevating|..I'm The General & Your The Bitch..|You Can't Stand To My Rank
Your See-Thru Kid|..Coz The Only Time I See Dollars..|Is When Robbing Banks**
Never Gett'n To Me|..Dude You Can't Reach My Level..|So Learn Son You'll Never Be Considered Important..
And I Don't Consider Myself A Thug|..But I'll Shoot Up J's..|Like A '94 Version Of Michael Jordan..

i had to copy the whole verse cuz it was simply sick...

thanks..

uppin'.. .

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Voted For: Wrecker

Vote Wrecker

For better punches, wordplay use of vocab and basically getting in that ass with some dope lines

Reachin Me??..You're Not Elevating|..I'm The General & Your The Bitch..|You Can't Stand To My Rank
Your See-Thru Kid|..Coz The Only Time I See Dollars..|Is When Robbing Banks**

DOPE^^^


J DOLLAR learn more consistent punches and some personals and work on uppin ya vocab some

NO BEEF JUST ELEVATE

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