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Check in by: 09-06-04 at 01:00 PM

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luminaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 01:01 PM.

Sultan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 01:03 PM.

my rhymes so hot they melt u into the molten sultan/
ur words mis-spelt they just gna be forgott..en/
ill unravel ur rhymes as if they made out of cott-n/
ur genderly challenged like u wer dennis rod-man/
ur tenderly scavenged rhymes pre-written, its a fact-man/
think that ur the sultan, thats nt the way to act-man/
my hunger make me eat ur words as if i was playin pac-man/
ur younger pre mature words plain hold u bak-man/
i will kik u off rap verse 4eva then they'll call u sul-banned/
my palm is too good for ya ill slap u with my bak-hand/
so u'll undastand this aint no battle version of making da band/
eventualy ur name will disappear like it was writen in the sand....

I know that when I spit....niggaz like u start blushin//
Lyrics burn like the "claps"....U sweat from internal combustion//
I won't hush....I'll touch ya soul like a preacher//
Your lyrics like fine hos....everybody had to "beat" em'//
If this was the Sahara....I'd behave like a lion//
Cuz I'm chokin' ya fronts (throat)....and spittin' out ya rhymes//
My wordplay is amazing....doctors can't figure my methods//
Lumi needs help, man....he piecing words together like Tetris//
I'm on my own natural high....and I don't need weed//
I'll "bust" from any direction....until ya "dome" starts to bleed//
Well, I'm gonna leave....You need time to heal, though//
How cute!!....A masked picture of you waving a dildo!! (His Avatar

I tried....

uppin 4 votes, honesty is the best policy, cheerz y'all

Voted For: luminaz

tight battle


but i give this to luminaz cos he had harder punches than sultan...both had a gd structure but luninaz verse wasnt as stretched as sultans and his metaz were tighter than sultanz...props to both tho


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Voted For: Sultan

i vote for sultan ........ i think his had better punches and a better structure

Voted For: Sultan

sultan:
i'll give it to ya, you had a better flow which made it easy to understand, better puches and better meta's, better all around, better structure as well

luminaz:
you had good punches but they didnt have anything to do with the one before it ya know what i mean? jus make em all tie in and you woulda taken it

vote//sultan