ive only just started man give me a chance to gety out my real shit dere will be a time when i think of my real shit i will get all my lines exact but at the min im thinking of sumthing mor inportant than some rap siteya raps my life but theres also mor important this i gotta think bout right now or this line wud be exact

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

i vote for naughty cuz ........ structure and punches were good and wordplay was awesome

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Voted For: PlaTinuM_

aiight this shit was sorta weak.....
opener - platinum
closer - naughty
flow - platinum
punchez - both pretty weak...
v/ platnium

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yo still uppin 3-1 uppin

im stil uppin for votez 3-2 cmon yall lemme have diz one PEEEEEECE

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Voted For: PlaTinuM_

I dont like tha way you flow//
i got 1 to da 2 to da 3 of ur sistaz they str8 h0ez//

Gotta be yo best line up in there...u had some pretty~hard punches in there...flow was aight..structure didn't stretched out or nuttin...but all 2gether yo punches were hard...

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thx..... still uppin fo votez... dont be sleepin yall!

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yo man 2-1 some of yo vote got d/qed
uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>dont leave us hanging yo

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Vote: Platinum

Lyrics: neither
Multies:Platinum
Structure: tied
Punches:Naughty Boy
Personals :neither
Wordplay:neither
Flow: pLatinum
Opening:Platinum
Ending: Naughy boy

Overall: Platinum

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Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

NB gets this cos he had a decent structure...i gatta say both sucked but NB had more punches and better wordplay....and his verse flowed better than PLATINUM's verse....i'ld advice both to work on rhymes and structure..cos non of u both rhymed a bar....but NB takes this for better punches and a better structure...

holla

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Platinum merked him. His structure flow metas and pucnhes were all dope. he had better concepts and delivery. naughty needs to elevaate

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

i vote platinum but this was very close, you both need to elevate more and come with harder punches and definately try get more personals..... platinums were just a lil harder which gave him this, also the flow was a little better!

also some of naughty boys lines didnt make sense, no beef... just constructive criticism yo!!

peace.... drop an honest vote on my battle please!! link is below

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Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

naughty boy took this, both need to elevate though. naughty, your flow was all over the place through this battle, you need to work on that. neither of them really had a decent punch in the whole battle, their punches weren't aimed at each other, just more like free-style disses to anyone. however, i felt platinums verse was not better than naughty boy's, coz i wasn't feeling his structure or punches. both need to elevate.

v/ naughy boy

thanx 4-4 after u vote leave a link ill vote on 1 of ur battles