Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 08:08 PM

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Lil-trip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 07:44 PM.

LyricalDon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 07:46 PM.

My "Lines" are the "Jail" nigga, You been "Barred" n "Shackled"
Guilty of "one" charge, U been "Raped" bitch n left mishandled
Not of AIDS or even Cancer, your still yearning the Answer?
Dont worry about the above, my "Lines" will kill you faster
Smokin my "High-Dro", n like this battle my "Eyes" are Closed"
Your rap career is like your sex life, lets jus' end it with a "No"..

whos the next man to get in?//
Lil-trip? ill leave you on ya death bed with a pan to piss in//
and no we cant talk it out//
so calm ya mouth, before im in ya HOME with a MASK like BIG MOMMAS HOUSE//
now i see how my spits could hurt you//
and ill leave ya girl COVERED IN NUT like the kid in the SNICKERS COMMERCIAL//
and im waitin for the semi to jam//
because i got two REVOLVERS on the LOW like YOSIMITY SAM//
and if you got heat, you aint blastin it right//
and you could DIE trying to SEE ME like the PASSION OF CHRIST//
and tell ya crew the same shit could happen//
its all over when i POST A CLIP to ya BRAIN with ATTACHMENTS//(think)
so i spit 8 bars and alot of people know me now, and while im with the bitch that started the kobe trial//
you in the crib PLAYIN WITH YASELF like a ONLY CHILD// WHOOO!
and dont doubt on the spark//
because ill put a GAP IN YA CHEST like you got JAKWON MOUTH on ya HEART//

lol, i thought we where doin '6' lines, when did you decide to change the rules homie

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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look at the rules u idiot it say 6 to unlimited lines u dumbass newb

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My "Lines" are the "Jail" nigga, You been "Barred" n "Shackled"
Homie acceptin this Battle, you got more than you can Handle
Guilty of "one" charge, U been "Raped" bitch n feel mishandled?
Run to "Mother" n tattle, she already knows you lost the battle..

Not of AIDS or even Cancer, your still yearning the Answer?
Dont worry about the above, my "Lines" will kill you faster
You "Work" my "Lines", N you wonder why i sit back with Laughter?
cus your mom "Sniffs" my "Lines", on her knees yellin master...

Don this news aint old, n' "I Call" n your the first to fold?
I was "Just gettin Cold", as im spittin this shit from My Taho
Smokin my "High-Dro", n like this battle my "Eyes" are Closed"
Your rap career is like your sex life, lets jus' end it with a "No"..

...~Hollah

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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Vote off above lines homies, lets get some votes, ight lets get this shit goin'

__________________
The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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Voted For: LyricalDon

Lil-trip:
ya flow was good. ya structure was good. ya punches just didn't stand up to your opponent's. Try harder, and you'll do fine, man.

LyricalDon:
Everything about your battle was tight!! You came with out swingin' with them punchlines. Ya structure was on point, and ya flow was cool. You got me with the two revolvers line...that one was tight. You got my vote.

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Voted For: LyricalDon

lyrical don took this one cuz he's got a fuller rap the other is to short. u need to step it up. lyrical has good flow to.all in all i think lyrical took this one. hey lyrical return the favor.

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Death is Upon us....

Voted For: LyricalDon

lol nothing on this battle its over don got it easy lil trip needs to elavate some more even ive beat him haha
punches don
opener don
closener don
vocab don
multis don
metas no one
v/lyricialdon

return the favour in my battle verse shake spear the link is in my sig thanks peace and vote honestly

Voted For: LyricalDon

bit of a weak 1

lil-trip
good struture
ok puches

lyrical-
wack stuture all over da place
but good pcuehs(the main part)

overall-lyricaldon
plz reutrn da favour
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