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09-08-04, 10:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
Intangeable
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what on my mind
IP: 5043 32F4
yo this is ebonicz wanna be among tha greatest/ emcee loved me till i broke them now they hate this/ trying to tell me how to act/ tellin me how to rap/ how i should drop a track/ why all this when you don't give a dam/ y'all never gave a hand/ see things done change but it aint not BIGGIE/ see you got step it up when you take on BIG E/ this is my first shit that i be spitin on rap verse/ its my life it all rap first/ that just tha way i live is HIP-HOP/ and ill never leave untill ma heart stop/ have your shit ever lasted an hour/ see i got y'all flabergasted wit ma power/ y'all got tha abilty to change shit or at least spark it/ thats why don't worry bout gettin killed and narking/ you wanna stop shit befor they it catsorphic/ and y'all know we all want tha profit/ |
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09-08-04, 11:17 PM | #2 | ||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 6CF3 3BD7
straight shit fam .. i mean nuttin that wil catch eyes but im feelen yah flow ..maybe if you add sum more complexity and shit youll be straight ... peep mah open mic issues addressed
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