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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Yu Spit First
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untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 08:52 PM.

Wise Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 09:07 PM.

this is a "game" but you dont get a "lifeline"
this guy touched more 'balls' than "Jordan" in his lifetime
"KILLA" literaly "Untounchable",but i make ya feel my statements
Even if you were a sick scientist,you couldnt make a iLL creation
1 vote- 2 vote-3votes- clown me if a KO's ya mission
please strip ya verse down only way that you gettin' poll position
wise shouldve known you couldnt survive this battle
to get somebody to dick ride his vote he went out and bought a saddle
ineffective challenges never impress me I spit monumental vengeance
wise Wun wouldn't get signed even if you were the declaration of independence
im a heavywight and trin is just plain Soft and Half Lame
and the other half Is just ass-cause you give Authentik Intelligence a bad name*

Abuse Yah Game !! Wit Hoes dis Dude dont wanna be ' fuckin ' , now Yah Wunda How he got that username?!?....
Rhymes Into Yah Brain !! Fuck 'Untouchable' , cuz only time he a 'killa' is in a fucken Video Game!!...
Leaven Yah Brain Baffled!! How Tha Fcuk Yu tellen " Me to read the rules " on A pm , when yu dont kno how to set up a battle??..
Feelen Mah Rhymes , Feelen it twice ! Yah Nice ? nah Yous like 'bad Card players' cuz yu aint neva DEALIN (with) WISE...



ehhh i got another battle to do on uf ..peace fam

upping

Voted For: untouchablekilla

Ight this battle wasnt too good... killa had this tho..

flow= killa... killa had the tight flow.. his flow was more easier to go wit and shit.. naw mean

structure= killa... just look for urself.. he doesnt have llike 10 words for the first line and 20 words for the 2nd..

multi= nobody

punches = killa.. ur punches hit hard and they connected and its wut won u this battle...

complexity =wise wun... ur shit is just complex and isnt played out

personals = killa.. he one one personal in there
im a heavywight and trin is just plain Soft and Half Lame
and the other half Is just ass-cause you give Authentik Intelligence a bad name*

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~~~~~Not battling anymore cuz so many wack herbs d/r or hate vote~~~~~

Voted For: untouchablekilla

you took it,

untouchablekilla- you had better all around punches word play ,and over all creativity, the punches were very secure, and didnt have that many faults, you had a good choice of vocab as well

wise wun- you need to elevate a little more you gots some talent jus work on your structure and not stretch'n things out, also get a better vocab , cuz untouchable killa had you there,


vote//untouchablekilla

i dropped an honest vote now its ur turn

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ayo peaceout

Voted For: untouchablekilla

yo ok battle. Both had some nice punchlines in they drops but killa got u.Both was funny. Killa the opener was good.Wise u gotta fix your structure i had to rreap yo shit twice to get it. FLow goes to kila. Punches killa by a lil. Opener kila.Structure...killa got it. over all yung got dis battle. no hate to both...had some good drops keep workin on yall shit.

thx for the honest votes any1 else wanna drop something?

Voted For: untouchablekilla

untouchable wins

flow: touchable most def
punches: touchable most def by far
creativeness by far in every line
personal touchable by far again...

this was one-sided........

upping