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09-10-04, 02:26 PM
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trying to elevate 2
IP: 0FDB 39D6
sit'n here in this chair consenplating
on which subject i'll be debating but i cant think my mind went blank words exacuted from my paper with a rubber shank every word in existance is disappearing from me like the titanic breaking in the sea open my mouth try'n to spit speaches muted, cat has my tongue, now im speachless 0-2 i have to get better then that pick up a dictionary and get what i lack study'n battle rappers and signed artist so my words can burn as if i was an arsenist get punches that'll mess with ya mental like "got ya mind so twisted its shows in ya physical" holla atcha boy and tell me whats up should i spit or keep my shit on the tuck
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09-10-04, 02:28 PM
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GoD LiKe
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This was an ok drop from you TANTO
gettin better i see,,,,,, Keep doin open mics like this and you will get better WANNA PEEP SOMTHIN GO CHECK OUT MY ANAGRAMS PEICE its a few links down
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09-10-04, 02:51 PM
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IP: 0FDB 39D6
yo, thanx for that...
i need more feed back, holla at me... even if you think is garbage
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09-10-04, 02:53 PM
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Sup man that was good, keep the flow and the vocab was
nice. When your not battling keep writing open mics and u will elevate. Also keep checking battles seeing how Vets and some newbs drop a verse,... I'm not telling you to bite but keep on track. Also to work on your vocab, write words like Beef,,.. and under it write words that rhyme with it that way you will get better vocab. Stay up and keep writing.. 1~ |
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09-10-04, 02:57 PM
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IP: 0FDB 39D6
yo, i might as well stay on open mic... i didnt get any love in my battles...
i was even battle'n youngstas... mostly cuz of my structure and lackin' meta's
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09-10-04, 03:12 PM
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.::TopicaLProdigY:::.
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No man just keep writing and elevating your still only new
and everyone had to start somewhere,,,... 1~ |
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09-10-04, 03:26 PM
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IP: 0FDB 39D6
thanx dawg... good lookin' up man... fa sho...
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