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Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 5 100.00%
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Old 09-11-04, 02:03 PM   #1
Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
Flyweight
 
From: NyC..NUFF SaiD!
Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG vs chillz

IP: 0825 899A

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DQ'ed for biting lyrics... unable to locate solid proof, but backed up by several people in RV Complaints
 
Old 09-11-04, 02:07 PM   #2
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Old 09-11-04, 02:12 PM   #3
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u noei'm banging thangs/high cause i o through more trees than orangutans/i got mo spots dan a leapord sking/ safes in da ceiling dat i stash drugs ad weapons in/already got boxes full of money like dat movie dat johnny depp was in/ yall got jewels but i doubt its da same shyne/ mine is like da sun andhe moon out at the same time/ my game smoothe like marahs skin/ but i trave with the goons cause i'm tryin t win/im blamed 4aLL THE HEA ROUND MY WAY/IA MAKE IT WITHOUT A MAKIN THEBAND ORA FREE STYLE FRIDAY/ I'M LEARNING 2 DEAL WIT DA NEW FACES/ I'M STARTING 2 HEAT UP SO MY DIC ETS MORE TOUNGE THAN SHOE LACES/ DEY ACT LIKE DEYOWN SLUGS ABD ARMORY/ IF THEY BUMP HEADS THEY'LL BE TALKING FASTER THAN BONE THUGS ND HARMONY U GON MAKE ME PUT THE CLIP ND POP YA/ YA HORIBLE I RATHER ST THROUGH N OPERA
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Old 09-11-04, 02:17 PM   #4
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mistakes -

high cause i go* leapord skin* and the moon out* trying to win* 4 all the heat* i am going to make it without a makin the band ora free style friday* dic gets* act like dey own*
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Old 09-12-04, 03:12 AM   #5
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Old 09-12-04, 03:35 AM   #6
Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
Flyweight
 
From: NyC..NUFF SaiD!
IP: 0825 899A

u nice? then whut vets c u?,talkin bout lead n ya dez eagle..
u said u "ghost write" u must mean sendin "letter's 2 dead ppl".

my killahs a dump da mag,or run in ya buildin n slump ya ass...
when dis dude gets "hott" he just "chillz" with a bunch of fags

its ya turn da die cuzz,da PLK hott ima burn dis guy's buzz....
chillz is already a dumb nigga n got da nerve da try drugs...
n after dis he a probly flip my bar's n use da words dat i does
in a minute chillz record a be worst then CERTiFiED THUG'S...

ppl think da lines i spit is kind of sick,dont rap go find a chick!!!
who gon sign dis prick?,im suprised dat he aint decline dis shit
we all know chillz he's da homo u know da kind dat switch....
im sick so all "pussy's" scared of me like i had a "9 inch dick"
 
Old 09-12-04, 03:40 AM   #7
DeNounced
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

well punchline king wins this easy chills was just flat out whack,with a gay ass structure that made it 10 times gayer...
punchlineking came coo,at least he came correct...

vote-Punchlineking...hands down...
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Old 09-12-04, 05:22 AM   #8
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

you---other dude bit his entire verse....shame shame
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Old 09-12-04, 05:23 AM   #9
Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
Flyweight
 
From: NyC..NUFF SaiD!
IP: 3240 794D

lmaoo yo i just notice dis shit dis nigga spit fabolous freestyle.....wow ur gettin banned dogg
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Old 09-12-04, 05:34 AM   #10
SoLe
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

punch took this battle easy with loads of personals in his verse.....this was funny to read....it had some good wordplay and flowed well......this verse was also easy to read and was overall better then chillz

chillz had an iight verse....some nice metaphores....verse was kinda hard to read and THE FLOW WAS CHOPPY.......SOME ADVICE IS TO STRUCTURE YOUR VERSE so the punches are set-up better and they hit harder....but overall ima give this battle to PUNCH......chillz elevate playa
 
 


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