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View Poll Results: ArchAngel(A.I) vs Trooper(Council) | |||
Trooper | 2 | 28.57% | |
â€- ArchAngel â€- | 5 | 71.43% | |
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09-05-04, 08:47 PM | #16 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
you punches miss,so how are you winning when you got ripped by -Explicits'-two-line-diss Don't get smart-kid! have you wrapped up and-tarnished,got asthma? Dawg i'll leave you gaspin regardless.. lol...i liked that line..but anyway my vote goes to Arch...(to me tho) i think his punches were a slight harder den Trooper's...tha structure was a little stretched out...tha flow was pretty decent and wordplay was nice... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-05-04, 09:43 PM | #17 | |||||
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IP: D135 D6AF
That shit aint explained lol
dont even count dude
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09-06-04, 03:32 PM | #18 | |||||
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This was feedback posted for â€- ArchAngel â€-
IP: E587 9CBA
checkin out the battle and the poll
both of you did well
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09-06-04, 04:19 PM | #19 | |||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
Archangel- your verse was nice...i enjoyed it...your punches were nice too...some hit hard but not many but mostly your punches were nice...your structure was aight could have done better with it...your metas had some good ones...overall you got this battle with better punches and a better verse... Trooper- your verse was also nice...but i liked archangel's more...your punches were also good to but some just werent hard enough...your structure was very very nice...you had some metas...had a few personals...but overall it was close but archangel got this... v/ArchAngel
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09-07-04, 12:02 AM | #20 | ||||
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IP: AED6 78BF
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
Yo.. You both chill with me.. Dont get pissed if i vote against you.. Trooper structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Arch Angel structure is ok.. ur lines r stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the stretchness.. good multis.. wordplay is tight.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal.. Overall Trooper had the better structure.. as well as the better flow.. both had dope wordplay.. Arch Angel had more multis.. more connecting punches.. and the better personal.. so basing off of that.. Arch Angel gets my vote.. VOTE - ARCH ANGEL PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. thanx.. |
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09-07-04, 02:18 AM | #21 | ||||
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IP: C56C 93CC
upp this shyt man
finally no d/ring votes...lets go
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09-09-04, 12:55 AM | #22 | ||||
FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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for trooper
IP: 560A 05B9
ay yo...this was a sick battle...wish i could vote...trooper u came good...u had punches, personals, multies, and all dat shit...haha...arch...urs was good to G...just troops was a lil harder to me...u had some good hits, BUT, u dropped off the flow in the begining...thats how you lost it...i am really suprised its 2-2...it whould be 4-0 troop...but thats my opinion...good look both of you...~1~
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09-09-04, 01:48 AM | #23 | ||||||
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Vote: Trooper
IP: 666C F77E
Trooper: had flawless structure, good personals an example of that is the first bar, nice wordplay, good punches, and had good metaphors
Archangel: structure fell off after a while, nice wordplay, good metaphors and multi's, good punches, streched ya lines out the flow of archangel thru me off, both of u are good as shit but my vote goes to trooper |
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09-09-04, 04:17 PM | #24 | |||||
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IP: D135 D6AF
Uppin
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09-10-04, 10:55 PM | #25 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
ok good battle let me break it down.... punches are counted in four catigories: 1.complesxity:AA 2.wordplay: AA 3. impact:AA 4.originality:AA structure:AA (troops was choppy) "Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker" i swear on everything i love that you bit this line from somewhere... i heared it from schema or somebody..... anyway bit or not AA wins no hate jus my oppinion i'm out ~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-11-04, 12:20 AM | #26 | |||||||
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IP: D979 BFDC
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
ima have to give this one to you...i think you won becuz of ya punches...dont get me wrong..Troops punches were good too...but yours were more unique...ya vocab and wordplay was overall good as well...a couple of ya lines was stretched ..so work on that...ya opener coulda been betta..but ya closer was good.. Trooper..ya verse was ok too but the punchlines didnt hit like archs did...his shit seemed more unique..it seemed like yours was main street punches relating things to famous peeps...i just think that you lacked the wordplay and punches that arch had...but still good battle
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09-11-04, 12:27 AM | #27 | |||||
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IP: D135 D6AF
Lol dr votes
them shitz dont count we'll see if strobe take em off or not cuz kno damn well i aint lose this damn battle
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09-11-04, 10:33 AM | #28 | |||||
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IP: C20F AEC1
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
alright this was a good battle... arch angel came pretty hard with punches..i have seen drop better verses.. trooper ur verse was aiight his punches was aight some kinda played.. like that clark kent line i saw stuff like that before.. structure and flow u both kinda came even on that... so overall this was a real close battle but i say arch cause his punches were better
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09-12-04, 12:39 AM | #29 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-
damn everyone is going against trooper any more lol arch has some mad funny shit and it was allnice except for the flow it was a little off. mults<alot and that good. complex rhymes were tight everything hit and it was a mad close battle. best line was: man you gettin crunched-and-then-soiled, How ya verse gonna mix when ya flow is vinegar and ya punches are oil?.. evident you can't elevate cuz all your spits are wack, cuz like "midgets" you can talk shit, but can't "say shit to my face!"... i got it idk if anyone else did troop nice flow but not to good in any thing else. good opener good closer. good vocab, and good mults but not feeling the ""'s. best line: Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination Your Attributes Unheard of Like R kelly Legal Age sexual Relations winner arch
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