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Check in by: 09-14-04 at 09:31 PM

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Chillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 11:17 AM.

they call me bklynz finest, bitch who da fukk u think u tlk'in 2/ill leave yo ass dead n then spit all up in ya fuckin food/im the king of da world/all u niggaz betta bow 2 me/b4 ill have yo country lookin like tha Hiroshima tragedy/if u think u got ballz 2 cum at me nigga/u besta get red 2 feel ma gat buss nigga/i check yo girls like an inspecta/ cuz i dun mind runnnin up on ya momz if i have ta/ill puff on ya grlz pussy like i puff on treez/go from "hey ma wazzup" 2 havin ha on ha kneez/u fuck wit me/ill fuck wit her/du ya mom so hard dat it'll start 2 burn/mezz wit chillz and my performances leae people clapping/wake up in ICU/doc asked u "WHAT HAPPENED?"...

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 03:49 PM.

talk cray-zz,i spray heat hollows fill ya bodi with little elements..
stop quotin u tha "King Of Da World",thas not irrelevant..
i spray lead,pray at ya head,leave u with no "Brains"n u gone die unitelligent..


ya rhymes is a mess..no wonda u at see tha accept sign 4rm Trooper..(Trooper declined tha battle)
n if u act tuff i put tha owls 2 ya chest like tha employees at hooters...
wonder wea ya girl at?? she "DOODLIN"the "COCK" like roster(noise Roosters make)


u aint a "King" u a prince like Will..
puttin tha heat 2 ya chest will make u loss tha "Chillz"
fuck heat,u get beat severly send u home lookin like Emmit Till..

i drop tha medal 2 ya head,crane..
fix mah aim..put tha burna 2 ya brain..
u would have a have a stroke like Rick James..

i shoot "Cream" at ya gurl face like she was n a team wit clowns..
u beatin me is like tha super bowl b n hosted by the Cleveland Browns..

~Punchline~
if death u see,mah 9 read ya mind like telepathy,its obvious u aint readi so next time dont step 2 me..
catch more holes den tha letta B..fuck it i leave u "WEAK IN THA KNEES" like SWV

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Voted For: NewKid

talk cray-zz,i spray heat hollows fill ya bodi with little elements..
stop quotin u tha "King Of Da World",thas not irrelevant..
i spray lead,pray at ya head,leave u with no "Brains"n u gone die unitelligent..
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCH AND A OPENER NICE

ya rhymes is a mess..no wonda u at see tha accept sign 4rm Trooper..(Trooper declined tha battle)
n if u act tuff i put tha owls 2 ya chest like tha employees at hooters...
wonder wea ya girl at?? she "DOODLIN"the "COCK" like roster(noise Roosters make)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ KO BITCH

u aint a "King" u a prince like Will..
puttin tha heat 2 ya chest will make u loss tha "Chillz"
fuck heat,u get beat severly send u home lookin like Emmit Till..
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DAT WAS I-L-L


i drop tha medal 2 ya head,crane..
fix mah aim..put tha burna 2 ya brain..
u would have a have a stroke like Rick James..
^^^^^^^^ YEA PUNCH DECENT

i shoot "Cream" at ya gurl face like she was n a team wit clowns..
u beatin me is like tha super bowl b n hosted by the Cleveland Browns..
^^^^^^^^ PUNCH NICE MAYNE META'Z

if death u see,mah 9 read ya mind like telepathy,its obvious u aint readi so next time dont step 2 me..
catch more holes den tha letta B..fuck it i leave u "WEAK IN THA KNEES" like SWV
^^^^^^^^^^ WHOA CLOSA IS DA BOMB NICE MAYNE

AIGHT I READ CHILLZ VERSE BUT IT HURTED MY EYES YO VERSE IS WACK AND YO STRUTURE ITS TEARING MY EYEZ

NO PUNCHES WAS IN DER THOUGH KEPT TALKIN DAT U WAS DA KING AND SHIT, U HAD SOME FLOW, DIDNT HELP U MUCH HERE THOUGH, FIX DA STRUTURE DAT WAY IT MAKE IT MORE COMPLEX AND AN GOOD FLOW//

NICE NEWKID KEEP DOING YO THANG U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE MAYNE

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Voted For: NewKid

i gotta go it NEWKID he came harder flow was tight punches was tight word play was aiight he just came harder then chillz so i got wit NEWKID

Voted For: NewKid

well ima have to give this one to my boi new kid
he came alot harder then chillz and his punche's actually connected

Newkid
wow you keep impressing me ... your verse easily merked Chillz hands down...multies were good but sometimes made your verse..alittle stretched...structure was way off...lines were reall strected..punchlines were really good hitten hard and making there mark...personals were there but some really werent hitten very hard...overall you had a nice all around verse...nice job..

Chillz
your verse was pretty weak all around.....punchlines were really weak...personals were there but really werent hitten anything .. multies were .....blah because they really wasnt any ... overall your verse was realyl weak and you realyl need to elevate...

overall vote-Newkid

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Voted For: NewKid

well pretty weak battle for both

Newkid had the better structure

flow sided with him too

chillz had self glory in it ALOT

flow was ok tho
but flow means nothing if not leading to a punch

so my choise is

NK

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