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X-§tatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 01:26 PM.

Chillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 01:32 PM.

aight....

his aim: busta112233
"ass" is in avatar
stephen kings book "Chills"
"O-bitch-U-Weary" is like saying Oh bitch your weary and it is a metaphore of Obichuary


yo...ill send *Chillz* down your Spine cuz i Kill with nines //
put a bullet to your mind , im fucking you up like its shooting *X-stacy* //
my *flow* is drowing your ass like *Heinesse* //
and im ripping this *Pussy* like a 35 pound *Pregnancy* //
see, im ending Chillz in *Text* like i just *Closed-The-Book* //
thought i picked a vet but now i see ive Chose-The-Rook //
as i leave you battered and bruised and killl ill have you in a state of *O-Bitch-U-Weary* //
as the occcupants of the graveyard welcome new *Chills* to the Cememtary!!!

ehh, did this half assed cuz im sick right now..but i was feeling a battle.

fuck x-static i'm burning him like trees/i even got his girl at home waiting on her knees/ he thinks he's nice he thinks they calling him a G/This nigga is wack a wanna be mc/ He's shit just like them taliban over seas/he can call me wack but he wants skills like these/ you know i roll on twenty fo's/ i got a line outside my house with all kind of hoes/ and i'm keeping it gangsta cause niggas dont wanna play with me/and were ever i go im spending g's/and when i roll by the whole block starts to shakes/ and when i roll at night everyone stays awake/ and you told me u already accepted and dropping ur ryhme/ and when u said that and accepted was at 2 different times/ you sat down and tryed to prewrite yo shit/ well this is rapbattles u accept and spit/ and u know this wont happen in the empire state/when u roll round these streets u better be able to hold ur own weight/ cause i'm down with all gangs/ the bloods, the crips ,and the kings/ and we roll around at night committing our sins/ we smoke weed and got needles sharper than pins/ and if we meet in the streets i'll shoot 2/ the both hit u and one goes through / and u'll be sitting in the emergency room with a hole in ur head/ they put u on life support and u already dead/ and they bring ur mom in i see her crying on the news/ and i'm sitting in my house rich and laughing like cheap orthadox jews/ and nigga u dead i got this match one/and i'll just end this because i had my fun/

Voted For: X-§tatic

my eyes hurt

punches-
personals- X
multis- X
metas- X
word play- X
flow- X

X good verse. keep workin on multis and personals

chill u need structure cuz i could barely read your verse. u kept self glorifyin not punchin.

X:
"my *flow* is drowing your ass like *Heinesse* //
and im ripping this *Pussy* like a 35 pound *Pregnancy* //" good punch.

Chill:
"fuck x-static i'm burning him like trees/i even got his girl at home waiting on her knees/ he thinks he's nice he thinks they calling him a G/This nigga is wack a wanna be mc/" good rhymin but not a very hard punch

v/ X

*punches- X

my bad my keyboard screwed up and i didnt notice it.

Voted For: X-§tatic

X-§tatic
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Chillz
Elevate More...
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was wack...
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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Voted For: X-§tatic

chillz flowed longer and i liked the flow better x static i wanna see how he flow when he not sick

Voted For: X-§tatic

yo i think xstatic won dis battle because his punches hit harder and were more effective. chillz did not have any flow or structure at all. (no hate), he had a little wordplay but x-static was more consistent. my vote is x-static

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Voted For: X-§tatic

x got diz dere wuz no compeition cuz hiz flow actually rhymed n made sense nice punchez n perzonalz 2 but chillz i culd not understand yo rhymez it wwuz all fukked up

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