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6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
you a bitch and we gonna get dis done quick

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 11:46 PM

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SoLe has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:01 AM.

yo ugly......r u gonna drop or not.....................

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 12:26 AM.

::This battle is like blowin dracula......he's goin down for the COUNT::

Finish him quick:::::::

I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??
you's-a-faggot, dude-ya-braggin', gettin beat by me was due-to-happen,
rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered......

::The finisher::

I'm about-to-haunt-you, im beatin you so bad, you'll wanna file out-a-lawsuit,
you fake skills, only reason you shine cuz ma reflections bouncin-off-you!!!!!

my verse step on ur ass like it was the soles of my shoe//
u 5 and 0 but i'm air you out like i was dj clue//
i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//
u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//
you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//
your from the dirty but you about to get washed//
it's over, your done, and all the beef is squashed//

Voted For: SoLe

Ayo, Sole had some raw punches although you both had good structure. AKA I've seen you come harder than this before, it just looks like this time you didn't put much effort into your drop. Sole, you had some good multis that fit right in with your structure and punches, good shit. I was especially feelin' the finisher, although the "loser bracket" line was hot too...
Vote - SoLe

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Voted For: SoLe

my verse step on ur ass like it was the soles of my shoe//
u 5 and 0 but i'm air you out like i was dj clue//
^^^^^^^^ ok good punch

i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//
^^^^^^^^^^^ good punch a decent one though

u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//
^^^^^^^ whats an hick but dats an good punch

you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//
your from the dirty but you about to get washed//
it's over, your done, and all the beef is squashed//
/////////// overall dat was a good one 9/10

I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??
you's-a-faggot, dude-ya-braggin', gettin beat by me was due-to-happen,
rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered......
^^^^^^^^^^^ lol good multiz and punches and personals nice mayne dats an ko to me

I'm about-to-haunt-you, im beatin you so bad, you'll wanna file out-a-lawsuit,
you fake skills, only reason you shine cuz ma reflections bouncin-off-you!!!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice mayne ko nice verse

sole got dis cuz of betta punches nice mayne

v-sole return a fav

Voted For: A.K.A.

ok the kid done did it again

A.K.A.: nice punchs personals were tight but you could had more word play and mults nice flow. i didn't get the closer though? best lines: i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//
u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//
you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//


Sole: half the time you were just rapper and not hitting him and even though the mults was hot as hell thats it. i didn't like how you laugh at your own jokes. and that big puase at the end was bad. best line: idk they never hit him but i guess: I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??

Voted For: A.K.A.

Damn both was really goodbut i think the break down would go to A.K.A.
my verse step on ur ass like it was the soles of my shoe//
u 5 and 0 but i'm air you out like i was dj clue//(good opener and nice punch at the very start)
i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//(lolol damn nice)
u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//(damn i get it funny shit)
you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//(another on this all funny)
your from the dirty but you about to get washed//
it's over, your done, and all the beef is squashed//(ok it a closer but no punch but i'ma still be laughing for days)

Sole:
::This battle is like blowin dracula......he's goin down for the COUNT:: (i couldn't tell if you was starting it wit dis)

Finish him quick:::::::

I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..(isn't always that way???)
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??(i don't get it)
you's-a-faggot, dude-ya-braggin', gettin beat by me was due-to-happen, (mults but boring)
rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)(laughing at yourself lol cause it ain't funny)
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....(i don't no what to say)
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered...... (same as the rest ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz)

::The finisher::

I'm about-to-haunt-you, im beatin you so bad, you'll wanna file out-a-lawsuit,
you fake skills, only reason you shine cuz ma reflections bouncin-off-you!!(didn't like the break)

winner aka

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Voted For: A.K.A.

this was a pretty weak battle but ima have to give this one to AKA

breakdown

aka


my verse step on ur ass like it was the soles of my shoe//
u 5 and 0 but i'm air you out like i was dj clue//
pretty hot opener
i'm a dawg with no soul so you can't diss me//
i'm rated x and you rated g like a movie from disney//
1st lines was alittle weak second nic
u think i'm ugly but you afraid to post your pic//
this cat say he gangsta but he really a hick//
weak
you acn't say that shit we no u wanna be me don't lie//
i'll bullet in ya like open your mouth and say ahhh//
decent
your from the dirty but you about to get washed//
it's over, your done, and all the beef is squashed//
okay closer

overall decent verse 7.5/10

sole
I'm gonna punch-ya-teeth, till its left un-der-neath, ya tongue-and-cheeks..
when i battle, i'm bringin guns-wit-me, how come you only roll knuckle-deep??
weak opener
you's-a-faggot, dude-ya-braggin', gettin beat by me was due-to-happen,
rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)
lmoa...good line
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered......
lol

::The finisher::

I'm about-to-haunt-you, im beatin you so bad, you'll wanna file out-a-lawsuit,
you fake skills, only reason you shine cuz ma reflections bouncin-off-you!!!!!
nice closer

overall nice verse 7/10
if you had came alittle harder you would have took this

overall vote-AKA

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Voted For: SoLe

No comp..Sole's punches was sick. Knocked this nigga AKA the hell out. AKA i've seen better then this from you before. Wheres da punches and shit at? You let this battle slip outta ya fingers. Sole wins cause of punches and structure.

Voted For: A.K.A.

gotta give it to aka for punches structure and flow

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Voted For: SoLe

A.K.A- verse was alright man a few good punches there i felt decent structure wordplay and vocab was basic and overall was an alright drop which i didnt really feel.

Sole- lol.....funny verse there i liked ya punches especially this...(rumor-has-it, you couldnt advance in this if there was a losers-bracket!!!(LOL)
peeple said u was hot, but i need ta take-ya-temperature....
seems ya sufferd frum writers block since tha day-ya-registered......) man i like ur style to me this was a good drop i liked ya wordplay n felt this verse more than the other.

Vote - Sole

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