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sultan | 2 | 28.57% | |
Ill-Grammatix | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-10-04, 12:00 PM | #16 | |
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Voted For: Sultan
decent battle i guess. sultan your verse would look alot better if ya took all the ()//"" < characters out of it..makes it easier to read, and helps on the enjoyment.. also, fix your rhyme scheme up, because it seems like theyre all over the place.. punches- sultan (some creative ones) personals- none, really.. werdplay- sultan. flow- tie. multis- ? vote- sultan.. decent battle. drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270
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09-10-04, 01:27 PM | #17 | |
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IP: 0FDB 39D6
nice lil' battle sultan
one day we will battle you's my nigga
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09-11-04, 09:18 AM | #18 | |
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uppin this.. let's get this thing closed out with some honest votes ppl
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09-12-04, 01:28 AM | #19 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Sultan
Sultan -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. Ill G. -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. ill g. elevate more Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-13-04, 01:32 PM | #20 | |
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
Vote: ill Lyrics: ill Wordplay: sultan Originality: tied Opening: ill Ending: sultan Punches:ill Personals: neither Multies: neither really Flow: ill Overall: an aight battle but ill came stronger and less wit da "fuk,bitch suk a dik" type crap im gettin acustomed to seeing. Peace, return favour!
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09-14-04, 03:49 PM | #21 |
illy fo' really
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IP: A10D 4933
Ill Gram (No Pun Intendid) ... Jus Checkin Out Sum Of Ya Shit ... Lookin Good ... Still ... lOl ...
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09-15-04, 08:23 AM | #22 | |
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No multies?... ya might wanna read my verse again homie....lol
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09-15-04, 06:09 PM | #23 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin for votes....let's get this thang ova with!!!
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09-17-04, 03:31 PM | #24 | |
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
gramatix, your flow rolled off the tongue easier than the sultan's mommas pussy juice |
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09-17-04, 06:52 PM | #25 | |
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I can't stand stand fuck niggaz like u. Go back and attach yourself to the underbelly of ya momma's cunt...u bottom-feeder. And if u got something else to say....then battle me, motha-fucka!!! Other than that...we need some more of votes (from real rappers, not wanna-be puzzle niggaz).
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09-17-04, 08:22 PM | #26 |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
It's time to dine...and I hope ya hungry// Rhymes like "wild turkey suprise"....leavin guts rumbling like Bugs Bunny*// And niggaz say I rule lines like Tommy (Maddox)// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ nice opener homie,,,,,,, nice punch too Put the "Steal" to ya "ears" (Steelers)// Give ya a "package" (a lost)// Motivate ya ass to start running// I treat this shit like "Monopoly"// Cuz I "Shoot" niggaz off "Ladders", tryin' to elevate on my "property"**// This battle's locked up// I can't say if ya "pussy or an asshole"...either way, ya gettin "fucked"// ^^^^^^^^^^^^ o aight mayne u had flow and punches ur gettin heated~! And, ain't no way you can recover, dude// Cuz I'll leave a nigga in the "dark"....like the girl on 3LW***// U wanna be a "Rebel"....chillin', "Campin"// Until I "Nick" a piece of ya jaw....courtosy of my shinny, chrome "Cannon"// Sultan knows that his rhymes are brutal// U can tell by my opponent's name....I've been had his "Stamp-of-Approval"// And this shit came straight from my mental// I've packed your shit up....cuz there's new management at "Merk Central"// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha nice closa and dem punches meta'z mayne (whoa) keep at it just look above me... that bullshyt that was dropped was just "in-sultan" like old school R&B songs done again by Michael Bolton (lol) ^^^^^^^^^^^ oooooooooooo nice opener mayne w/punch Original rhymes... and yo lines? they come a dime a dozen Ya lyrics ain't buzzin' cousin! Stop breaking the bank for nothin'! I'm crushing ya flow, crushing ya hopes, crushing ya dreams you just a textee with a rap career that's stuck in a screen It's gon' take more than just a mere noobie to do me You ain't "Scrappy" enough; I think you need to go and find "Shaggy and Scooby" and pray that "Velma" can come up with a hypothetical thoery cuz without that... there ain't no other way you gettin' near me ^^^^^^^^^^^ ha ha ha ha ha ha ha what! nice punches homie dats wayyyyyyyy harder mayne (fiya) keep at it lets read da closa back that ass up or get clapped with the quickness death by Ill-Grammatix's ya fastest to seeing sickness I'll flip ya simplistic linguistics and leave you mentally twisted so that ya brain no longer knows that you existed acidic flows I spit at foes with hits thats crit-i-cal landing blows like Riddick Bowe while you crying "Quit it, yo!"... lmao ^^^^^^^^^ nice closa da whole verse had some throwin punches mayne// nice i vote for ill grammatix cause he had me with da scooby line (lol) plus he had an lil personal and a punch sultan u had good verse homie u had punches throwin but i voted for G becuz he had da personal and a punch to go with it and plus dat scooby line (lol) v-Grammatix for personal and punches and dat scooby line (lol) |
09-18-04, 06:28 AM | #27 | |
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
yo nice battle lil wins this 1 close battle tho lil had beter punches n per, met n all that hes won this 1 plz return da fav on 1 of my battlez in my sig pz out consider closed |
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