to be for real i think scrip won this battle 2....i think his wordplay and punchlines were mad more better....and...i think his struc was ok.....just overall an better verse..



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yo vote to scriptive, yours wasn't as original jus cuz ice picks a freak and does wierd shit like that, but u killed 'em wit wordplay punches that i wish i would of came up before u lol. but ya das what wins battles, both of u need to work on actually doin personals though, neither of ya really had many.

vote scriptive.

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PUNCHES THAT WON THE BATTLE^^^^

Punches- Scriptive
Personals- Tie
Flow- Scriptive
Wordplay- Tie
Multis- Scriptive
Metaphors- Ice Pick
Structure- Scriptive
Originality- Ice Pick
Vocab- Niether

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VOTE-SCRIPTIVE.

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this was a hot battle...scriptive came hard with his flows, nice multia and nice punches...but i think pick took it with better wordplay, nice structure and harder punches...keep elevating people...no hate scriptive, i just think pick took this one...elevate

drop votes on the below battles, and week shameful rapper people

Scriptive Won This Battle Off Top.. His punches were steady, his wordplay was better, more vocab and i also liked his structure better.. Ice Pick, you need to elevate a lot, your punchline were really played in that verse, your flow was off and you had a lot of filler, scriptive however came with fire in every round.. honestly he took it hands down.. i hope you don't get this battle closed because people voted against you either, this is honesty.. You need to elevate a whole lot before you can be a real contender and win fairly without complaining.. no hate..

Vote = Scriptive.

return favor in this battle rihttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250ght here..

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I already knew that he'd block me, but you got burned once again cuz, you are so predictable, LMAO, that verse wasn't good at all... do you tho,

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

how many votes have i had for me bout 7... so i shouldav won this by now whats goin on????

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My Vote Goes To Ice Pick, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Ice Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...

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ice pick:your verse had great flow from beginning to end, you threw witty and creative punches at him,while i was reading this, i heard the delivery in my head, this would be a dope audio verse, your vocabulary was ill, and your opening chicken line was funny as hell, i just think your verse read better, and you took this because of flow, and all the hard disses...
scriptive~your verse was good as well, but it seemed like i've heard some of your punches before, the belts line for instance, but you did have impeccable flow, but i had to give it to ice pick for originality in his verse......this was tough but great job both....pc
vote:ice pick

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na dis battle was mad close i cant tell hoo won it

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scriptive got this i think good battle from both though close

basically scriptive won this cuz he had harder hittin punches, mad props to script ice u had some hot ones too no hate but scripts just felt they hit harder in this battle and i enjoyed them a lot more, thats what won this, both did really good in every category good luck no hate peace

^scriptive u prolly didnt win yet cuz they didnt vote on the top or cuz a few of them got disqualified for inadequate feedback

Ice Pick:
k man you were better but still need work on your punches lol but naw you dont this is just a super old battle...your stucture needed work in this battle and your flow off a little cuz of your stucture but naw still good verse try and work on vocab more but you had way better stucture then scriptive lol you merked this guy lol this battles so old lol scriptive is better then this lol and so are you...both by far...

Scriptive:
k your better then this, but you were weak here hella weak punches hella weak..your stucture needed alot of work and your flow was fucked madly cuz of your stucture lol...vocab needed work um try and work on your punches alot man...but i dotn think you even battle or go on this site anymore so why i need to explain it so much...

VOTE: Ice Pick

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