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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
final 5 55.56%
Boy_wonder 4 44.44%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 09-16-04, 12:21 PM   #16
the_crazy_one
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From: Keokuk Ia
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Voted For: final

final that was great i loved it you merked him to the end of merking ness that was great for only taking 15 mins to do i mean it Great
 
Old 09-16-04, 04:17 PM   #17
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

it was just ...ok... i just wrote it for like 5 minutes last night, should of put more work since my first battle but whatever....uppin for more votes
 
Old 09-16-04, 07:31 PM   #18
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This was feedback posted for Boy_wonder

IP: B1AB 4B61

average battle

punches- wonder
personals- neither
multis- wonder
multas- neither
word play- wonder
flow- final

Wonder u had some nice punches and punchlines, but u need more hard hittin and more of em.

Final liked ya flow, but your punches were weaker than wonders.

Wonder:
"i think imma go get tha new album buck dropped...
u so fukkin broke u cant even window shopp...." nice closer

Final:
"to this kid banks is the one to be admired/
he aint got enough skills for that role t be aquired/" nice opener.

v/Wonder if i could vote
 
Old 09-16-04, 08:47 PM   #19
intensify effect
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Voted For: final

this was tight...

flow: even
punches: even
diss: final

all around basicly it was final who had the better ending which helped me make my final answer but seriously ya are preety even and tie.......

nice battle
 
Old 09-16-04, 09:48 PM   #20
untouchablekilla
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IP: B780 BB9C

Voted For: Boy_wonder

boy_wonder just came harder his flow and punches were better and had bettern punchlines final ur just a n00b who whould leave this site u suck ur structure sucks and ur verse was wack just plain wack

v/Boy_wonder
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Old 09-16-04, 09:53 PM   #21
Boy_wonder
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lmao ,yeah dogg, uppin yall will return honest votez peace yall
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Old 09-16-04, 10:12 PM   #22
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

lol untouchable u just mad cuz i voted against u in one of your battles, talk about honest votes pick a winner cuz u thought it was hot not cuz u dont like me
 
Old 09-16-04, 10:17 PM   #23
untouchablekilla
-NOCK OUT KINGS- biatch
 
IP: B780 BB9C

i did he ripped u son enuff said no go run along and play kid.
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Old 09-17-04, 01:15 AM   #24
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

untouchable just shut up no need to argue about stupid shit like this but dont come here sayin stupid shit like "enuff said no go run along and play kid.", just because your mad at me cuz i didnt vote for u doesnt mean u could be disrespectful....just grow up man got nothin against u, im ending it now....honest votes yall uppin...im out for today peace
 
Old 09-17-04, 07:51 AM   #25
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Voted For: final

BLAH,WEAK BATTLE ya'll both need to elevate alot,work on your punches n structure them right,go to the tutorials cause both you are badly needing it....final gets my vote for attempting a battle verse n not having as much self glorification in his verse...nuff said..elevate..!!!
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 09-17-04, 10:48 AM   #26
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin......1 more vote just close battle on the next vote whoever it is, dont care if i win or not i need to elevate more
 
Old 09-17-04, 01:57 PM   #27
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 09-17-04, 02:32 PM   #28
Spektikul
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From: Canada
IP: 9E2F CDE8

Voted For: final

Boy Wonder:
Overall - 2/10

-Vocab was elementary
-didnt need the ... after every line
-Only multie was weak (hocus pocus)
-Basically whole verse was talking about what your gunna do to him, those arent punches, they are threats that will never happen...

Final:
Overall - 5/10

-Good vocab
-Solid structuring
-metas/multies are needed
-Personals are definatly needed cause you could basically use that verse on anyone on the site

As you can see from what I have just said above ^^^ Final is the winner here today. No hate, just an honest vote in my opinion. Peace....
 
 


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