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09-17-04, 11:40 PM | #1 | |||||
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"Tha Heist"
IP: 6EBF 30B1
Tha Heist..
Chorus ~ The Pans Set, my glocks is loaded, ma men are ready,and ma pockets bout to be blouded// bandannas round our face,hop in tha whip, dont forget tha suitcase,lets go get dis shit// Verse 1 pull up to tha bank,and hop out da whip, spray paint tha cameras,so security cant see shit// lock tha doors,and tell everybody to get on day knees, pull tha glock out,held to tha banker..gimme tha green// give him tha case, expect him to fill it up, gun shot to his face,tell ma bois to drill it up// bullets flyin everywere,and everyone is dieing, get dis done qwik,cuz iam startin to hear syrens// duck-tape a bomb to da counter, and hop in tha whip, gotta make it to da headquarters, and drop dis shit// Chorus x2 Verse 2.. Now we on our way to dat crib, after doin tha crime, hitin 180 on tha freeway, well tha cops is behind// cops shootin, so ma nigga grab his uzi, ma boi scream in pain and he start to get woozie// fuck they got ma man, so ma other nigga grab tha wheel, break open tha passenger window,reach down and grab tha steel// bustin shots, yellin out this is for ma nigga, i got tha cops wheels.day stop,so we go qwika// turn on tha street,and tha garage door open, get in tha house, and lookoutside and see the cops still parolen// Chorus Verse 3.. now its morning, and tha cops all gone, ma boi feelin fine, and he movin tha car off da lawn// we slit tha money even,and we on our way, iam on my way, to ma girls house thinkin i jus got paid, knock on my girls door, thinkin will i get laid// ma boi 2 way me ,congradulatin me on tha job, we pulled tha biggest height, so dont fuck wit tha mob// got 5 mill in tha bank, so i drop ma change, ridin in tha whip lookin outside thinkin tha blocks change, ride to tha airport,well ma girl gimme top in tha range// wunnnnn iam out holla...
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09-17-04, 11:43 PM | #2 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
ay that was kinda tight actually.gave me a good piture of what was going on and what it looked like. ur structure was good, flow was on point overall i give u a 8.5
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09-17-04, 11:44 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 6EBF 30B1
iight thanx mayne..
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09-18-04, 12:51 AM | #4 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
yea shit was aight use mo vocab though.....
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09-18-04, 01:12 AM | #5 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
lol dopeness
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09-18-04, 01:12 AM | #6 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Ya Needs Some Vocab Suck One! Peace
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09-22-04, 04:15 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 6EBF 30B1
iight thanx fo tha feeback uppin...
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09-22-04, 04:29 PM | #8 | |||
..G Clique..
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IP: 9EB2 5E16
dope as hell good job keep dat shit up my nigga
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