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09-28-04, 12:35 AM
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My Rap (First Verse)
IP: 3240 794D
I remember hearin rap for the very first time
Amazed at all these famous rappers makin words rhyme and now im doin it myself , woulda never seen it comin so now the mic is in my hand, please let me tell you sumthin it feels great to take a mic and get it in use rhymin words with eacother justa spit it to you transforming feelings into writing, bleedin from the thoughts undestructable lyrics feeling i can never be stopped and yet the question still arises once in a while can you feel what i feel? can you really get riled? and i know my fellow artists truly know what i speak these niggas know my train of thought, even know what i think tryin to convey something special and let you know whats goin on so listen closely to the lyrics that you hear in this song you might discover something good, and feel that way goin out get ready get set and learn what my rap is all about this is the first verse to my first audio venture coming soon, about what rap is to me basically what do yall think?
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09-28-04, 12:44 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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^word...
nice content. good flow.
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09-28-04, 12:45 AM
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i liked it man. the flow was persistant i think. keep it up
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09-28-04, 01:26 AM
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You Love My Style.
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Am feelin it i can vibe on this fam...olol GEt a MIC DAMMIT..lol
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09-28-04, 08:11 AM
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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flow was a little off at sum points,but for the most part it was good....
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09-28-04, 07:02 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin for feedback
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09-28-04, 09:45 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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Nice....Seriously nice job ...Flow was good...and eveything...keep it up....
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09-29-04, 06:26 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
lets get some more feedback...
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09-30-04, 01:09 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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word this is good way to start up... link me when you drop this audible styles...stay droppin famoz
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09-30-04, 06:35 AM
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New to RB
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IP: C1B6 770C
You gotta lemme here the audio to give you a detailed answer but from what i saw this'll turn out to be an aight track.. had some nice lines..basically tell you what you want to know
ain't nothin wrong with it..  return the favor Sage-How to Breathe through the Disease
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12-04-04, 08:11 PM
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Flyweight
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was really good
keep it up
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12-04-04, 08:21 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 7696 4EB2
that shit was hot. love tha flow of everything. some parts you could've gone deeper into cuz it seems like a deep rap but its still hot. (8.5/10) keep it up homie. come peep my shit sometimes. get at me!!!
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