Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 05:47 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

*lyrical madnes* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 05:49 AM.

yo smak u to da floor brek ya leg u wud be better at footie that a meg
kill u slice u in bits u anoyin like a little nit man shit i need a peg*
ill die fromm da smell of u fuckin hell u smell like poo go to tha loo
u thinkin u some bad man coz he cant afoord a van yes im talkin to u
yep u my be kindda new but im still gonna kick u until u bleed
yep hope u got good defence u gonna need it imas strong as weed





*=to put on my nose coz hes a smelly basterd

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 10:01 AM.

dawg wen da hell is u droppin ur verse in our battle, or did u already punk out?

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dawg i guess u not goin, so wat eva let me get strobe to close

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o yea i 4got i gotta post my verse to see urs my bad dawg

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My Flow Make U Feel Like U Gettin Corressed, Leave U Stressed Wit 3 Techs
Dawg Its Like NFL Football I Got Homecourt, But Don Feel Bad Cuz Even "System" A Guest
Dawg Im Five And 2, If U Havent Noticed Im A Lyrical Fene
I Line U Up To Shoot, And My Aim Is Accurate Like Da International Teams(olympics)
Dawg I Neva Run Out Of Hard Punches, I Always Stay Handy
While Ur Lyrics Is Spoiled Like An Only Child, Mine Is Fresh Like Mannie(Mannie Fresh)

Voted For: Notorious Verses

vote:N.V.

reasons:

NV had more vocab and it improve the complexity of the verse
NV had more original punches which creatd an enjoyment for the verse

NV's structure was better though wasn't good

I liked the opener more in LM's

but the closer killed his so
overall NV wins

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

flow-notorious, easier on the eye and was better in this case

punches/personals-notorious verses,harder hitting here lyrical jus seemed like he kept makin threats and they were weaker then notoriouses

creativity-notorious, lyrcials were just threats and kinda boring it was ok but not as creative as notorious in this case notorious were more better put together for the harder hitting punch

no hate on nobody honest vote good luck to both peace

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

yo smak u to da floor brek ya leg u wud be better at footie that a meg
kill u slice u in bits u anoyin like a little nit man shit i need a peg*
4...wat the fuck, rhymin is still weak man.
ill die fromm da smell of u fuckin hell u smell like poo go to tha loo
u thinkin u some bad man coz he cant afoord a van yes im talkin to u
3...NO!
yep u my be kindda new but im still gonna kick u until u bleed
yep hope u got good defence u gonna need it imas strong as weed
4...better than other lines but still, NO!

11/30


My Flow Make U Feel Like U Gettin Corressed, Leave U Stressed Wit 3 Techs
Dawg Its Like NFL Football I Got Homecourt, But Don Feel Bad Cuz Even "System" A Guest
6...nice line, 2nd was better.
Dawg Im Five And 2, If U Havent Noticed Im A Lyrical Fene
I Line U Up To Shoot, And My Aim Is Accurate Like Da International Teams(olympics)
6...ok meta, gud line!!
Dawg I Neva Run Out Of Hard Punches, I Always Stay Handy
While Ur Lyrics Is Spoiled Like An Only Child, Mine Is Fresh Like Mannie(Mannie Fresh)
6...aight stuff man, enuff to beat this clown!!

18/30

weak battle, but one came less weak than the other. both y'all need to elevate a hella lot. lyrical, u more so!!!

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

i think notorioous had better punches and better vocab, yo lyrical u need to quite talkin about poo, its getting old. so my vote goes to notorious verses.

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Death is Upon us....