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5 | 83.33% |
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10-02-04, 11:35 AM
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IP: 9F0E 5BA7
Voted For: Notorious Verses
yo i think NV takes this....cos first of all he hd more lines...so...more space for a better verse....he had harder punches wordplay and personals were tight...structure and flow were just a lil off..but mayne ya verse had all what it takes to win this...certifiedthug....yo no hate but ur verse was wackkkkkkkkkk....sturcture was off...no flow..no hard punches no decent personals...NOTHING!!!...i just think you have to elevate...NV takes this for a more complete verse... be honest on mines too...(sig) 1
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10-02-04, 02:09 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: Notorious Verses
aight oyu got this vote cuz you had better wordplay and an okay flow but some stuff didnt seem to rhyme but certifiedthug had a weak verse you had harder punches and better structure thug-you went easy on him i guess cuz your verse lacked your wordplay was grade skewl man work on that and punches werent that hard hittin and personals lacked structure was okay flow wasnt that great v/notorious verses
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10-02-04, 02:27 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Notorious Verses
*cough*cough* this a one-sided one who did everything right and one who did everythign wrong Verses: you had some very nice flow I read your verse with eas and not having to stop your structure was easy on my eyes you punches were nice but some weren't insulting him and more at what you used for wordplay like the philly line ut it was still nice Thug your lines were very short so flow was off teribly and punches were basic and so was ur voacb and al the verse was painfullybad vote/Notorious Verses
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10-02-04, 03:17 PM
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IP: 3CB0 FA3B
Voted For: Notorious Verses
yo my vote has to go to---- notorius that other kid really needs to eleavate! I really don't know how to break this one down---iight I'll try Vocb. - notorius Flow- notorius stu. - Notorius word play- notorius naf said................ WELL THAT WAS SIMPLE WHY MY VOTE IS THE WAY IT IS!
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10-02-04, 03:26 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Notorious Verses
^you should watch ur wordiness cuz it can throw off ya flow.... but nice opener, the closer was nice but doesn't rhyme.. best lines: I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful ^lol nice job... lol Certified's best happened to be: see man u try ta act hard wit ya record of 0 n 1/ man as u kan see u jus a straight bum/ ^not bad the only tru personal....... i see ya elevatin' ya verse... nice job.. I picked Notorious cuz he came harder with punches had the more creative touch in his verse.. nice wordplays some decent metas....... he had the better opener and closer and his vocab was really good........ y'all both gotta work on structure sum what... and certified u need to make ur verse a lil' complex or put sumthin' creative within it...... good luck with this, nice battle you two.. but Notorious got this battle easily.. Returnt the favor- or just peep my collab in my sig, pz..
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