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09-29-04, 06:14 PM
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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one more for the hell of it (PLEASE READ)
IP: A190 A400
hey, im leavin (*sob*) but im workin on a song currently for when i make my big comeback. i aint got a name, hell, i aint even finished the 1st verse, but i still wanna post it. check this out
who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/ date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/ dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/ am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/ cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/ well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/ cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/ i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/ i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/ that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/ do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/ but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/ im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/ u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/ squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/ im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend thats all i got. sum feedback please!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt  ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It Last edited by Eyvon : 09-29-04 at 06:28 PM. |
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09-29-04, 06:28 PM
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
please, a lil feedback for me?????????????????????
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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09-29-04, 06:30 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
wow its like an "encoure"...\\but 4 real this had some allright stuff in it. Rhyme's are simple. but it's a lot better than your remix to my band.Keep droping and elavating.....pz
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09-29-04, 06:40 PM
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
thanx, more feedback pleez!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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09-29-04, 07:04 PM
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IP: A190 A400
wut the hell else u expect me 2 say???? PLEASE READ MY SHIT!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-04-04, 07:50 AM
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IP: 1BA0 E69C
cmon yall.... uppin 4 feedback please!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-04-04, 08:20 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 4ED6 D0C7
aight it was aight.....u really need to work on your flow and like @ sed ur rhymmes are too simple....stay up
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10-04-04, 10:56 AM
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IP: B454 5C3F
yea ma...this was a simple rhyme, but u should eventually get it right. the rhyme was sick though...a lot of anger. keep it up though. peace
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10-04-04, 11:03 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
The 1st few opening lines put some discomfort in my regions but an aight spit still need work but hey we all need elevation...keep it up...hopefully u'll come back
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