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MATTEE1 2 28.57%
Mistic-Rogue 5 71.43%
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Old 10-04-04, 11:22 PM   #16
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

i vote for mistc cuz mistics verse really didnt bore me,
they both had flow and structure,
but it was the punches, there was bout only one i could really understand and that was the mj one,
that matte guy had me lost and if you goota read lower text to understand the punches they really arent that good
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Old 10-06-04, 12:06 AM   #17
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thx, uppin again!!
 
Old 10-06-04, 12:14 AM   #18
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

Mistic Rogue takes this..........

now what tha fuck r u gunna say bout an AUSTRALIAN emcee
cos when i drop ma first verse, you'll duck, bail n flea...
^^^^aight opener
why tha fuck does every1 call you KIWIS sheep fuckers n shit
is because youse are all ugly cunts and thats all ya'll can get a fuck wit...
^^^^second line stretched...
braise urself cos your gunna get smashed and disposed out to da trash
when we collide n clash, ma ryhmes will stick to ya lika deadly rash...
^^^^..........weak
i'll have you runnin a faster 100 than MAURICE GREEN on tha track
you'll be shittin youself cos i'll be commin at you lika pissed off SHAQ ATTACK...
^^^^.......DRY!
if you met me il'd have screamin lika bitch from a ghost-train
admitt urself to a mental home cos u'll go all crazy n insane...
^^^^weak punch
a multiple sentice spat at you would be very revoltable, when ur murdered your case wont be solve-able, cos ur face wont be reconisable...
^^^^aight punch
so back da fuck off, cos i'll hit you so hard u'll be bleedin when ya cough
i bet you couldnt even defeat a lil mouth, cos ur ryhmes r 2 weak and soft...
^^^^....another stretched line
your ryhmes are too wack not too mention minimal
there a crime, you'd get a whole life sentince you criminal...
^^^^Weak closer.....

Mistic-Rogue

Its time to diagnose you, with my ill as rymes//
The disease will kill you, over a long period of time//
^^^Weak opener
I think you misconcieve me, my mission is to destroy you//
And if i fail, ill just send micheal jackson to exploit you//
^^^^don't really get it......
Im sending my lyrical offences, to strike down your defences//
No guns needed, ill beat you with harsh language and rude guesters//
^^^^aight punch
You better gap to the fridge, before this heats up//
Or ill leave your mind crooked, like the leaning tower of pisa//
^^^^nice wordplay
Im diabolical and disasterous, like the devil himself//
Ill devastate you lyrical divices, with Amazing stelth
^^^^aight punch
This cat is getting dirty, ima need to clean him up//
If this bitch dont choke, ima nail his oesphogus shut//
^^^aight........
Im outrages and unstobable, like a thundering avalanche//
This guy doesnt understand shit, he uses more "Wats"(whats) than a power plant//
^^^^nice wordplay again, best punch of the battle
Your carrer is exstingquishing like a candle, Its nearly burning through//
next time you try to rap pople will be like, YOU THE FUCK ARE YOU//
^^^........blah!

Mistic wins due to better structured verse and flow, and his punches hits harder
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Old 10-06-04, 10:54 PM   #19
Mistic-Rogue
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upiin for votes!
 
Old 10-06-04, 11:05 PM   #20
50Cal.
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

lol matee your flow vocab and structure are all good but punches and disses are weak as fuck you need to work on that for real thats where you slacked 5/10
mistic good structure vocab and flow as well your punches werent great but they were good and disses hit this is where you won at and got my vote you have room for improvement but punches gave you a better verse here 7/10

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Old 10-07-04, 01:59 AM   #21
Mistic-Rogue
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uppin for some votes!!
 
Old 10-07-04, 02:00 AM   #22
JPoll
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This was feedback posted for MATTEE1

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gfhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggggg gggggh
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Old 10-07-04, 04:45 PM   #23
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue

mistic-rogue took this purely bcoz of better vocab and structure...
Flow/M-R
Vocab/M-R
Punches/Tie
Metas/none
Vote/Mistic-Rogue
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