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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 08:49 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

dflow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 08:49 PM.

streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 08:57 PM.

yo ill turn ya tee rose red/and like a stuckup up bitch ill leave wit no head/fuck wit me go head/no harm done/leave ya corpse decayin from my gun/and that lead to me layin in malibu/soakin up sun/before u thought u was gunna be pokin fun/at the illest mc/the realest next to run dmc/itll be suntin when me clips empty/now u aint frontin wit ya dome split cause u wanted to tempt me/i guess u a street ryda/but u started beef/and im ya meat supplya/put u in the ocean wit the charters and coral reef/have u in disbelief/cause my punchlines hit u so hard itll leave u wit no teeth/wit a heart cold like the deceased/and id go for for ya chain but its gold leaf/ the only grass u smokin on is under my feet/if it wasnt for instrumentals id use thunder as abeat/ so just except for defeat

dflow's mind is real slow, he cant keep up the pace
trace a line around your figure cuz you fell out this race
police cant understand how u just suddenly dropped
i worked you from the start causing your heart to stop
scared your face, embrace my lyrics, spirits blessed my mind
more unique than and uncommon than 4 leaf clovers to find
dont boast that u tuck heat, only hide your hand playin with ya meat
increased the count of the deceased found u on the obituary
mayb you'll find your way if you went on an itinerary
internal organs briused, abused and left a mangled body
choosed the wrong answer, loosed your life ouside the lobby
hobbies will get you dead, shot, or behind steel bars
sneak up steal ya life, diseased you like i spit real sars
dissed your body in the river but you wont be missed
pissed off the wrong person, so i deliver slits on your wrists

uppin man nice verse...lets get some votes comin pplz....peace~1

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Voted For: streetryda

yo ill turn ya tee rose red/and like a stuckup up bitch ill leave wit no head/fuck wit me go head/no harm done/leave ya corpse decayin from my gun/and that lead to me layin in malibu/soakin up sun/before u thought u was gunna be pokin fun/at the illest mc/the realest next to run dmc/itll be suntin when me clips empty/now u aint frontin wit ya dome split cause u wanted to tempt me/i guess u a street ryda/but u started beef/and im ya meat supplya/put u in the ocean wit the charters and coral reef/have u in disbelief/cause my punchlines hit u so hard itll leave u wit no teeth/wit a heart cold like the deceased/and id go for for ya chain but its gold leaf/ the only grass u smokin on is under my feet/if it wasnt for instrumentals id use thunder as abeat/ so just except for defeat
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ UM THA STRUTURE IS MESSED I CANT HARDLY READ IT.........BUT DA FLOW IS MESSED UP,,,,,,,,, IF U CORRECT DA STRUTURE A LIL BIT MAYBE U'LL GET DA WIN I C ALOT OF PUNCHES BUT DA FLOW IT JUST MESSED UP MAYNE


dflow's mind is real slow, he cant keep up the pace
trace a line around your figure cuz you fell out this race
police cant understand how u just suddenly dropped
i worked you from the start causing your heart to stop
scared your face, embrace my lyrics, spirits blessed my mind
more unique than and uncommon than 4 leaf clovers to find
dont boast that u tuck heat, only hide your hand playin with ya meat
increased the count of the deceased found u on the obituary
mayb you'll find your way if you went on an itinerary
internal organs briused, abused and left a mangled body
choosed the wrong answer, loosed your life ouside the lobby
hobbies will get you dead, shot, or behind steel bars
sneak up steal ya life, diseased you like i spit real sars
dissed your body in the river but you wont be missed
pissed off the wrong person, so i deliver slits on your wrists
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT MAYNE NICE VERSE HERE U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW GOING NICE STRUTURE

V-STREETRYDA CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

DFLOW-WHY U CALL YOSELF DAT WHEN U CANT EVEN FLOW~! LOL *AHEM* ANYWAY U HAD NO FLOW NO GOOD STRUTURE DA FLOW JUST MESS YOU UP IN DIS BATTLE I SAW ALOT OF PUNCHES ONLY U HAD FLOW U COULD GOTTIN AN VOTE OR GOTTIN AN WIN BUT DA FLOW IS MESSED UP DATS DA WHOLE ASPECT OF FREESTYLE DA *FLOW*

V-STREET CAUSE OF HARDER FLOW GOOD PUNCHES

~PEACE~

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uppppppin for votes and on that vote^^ glad to see ppl actually explain them

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Voted For: streetryda

street ryda took this easily...structure was way beter and so was the flow...your punches hit harder..no personals..overall you merked this kid...dont even know why you bothered battling him...your vocab.....didnt see to many

drop an honest vote on this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155760

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Voted For: streetryda

disappointing battle


Streetryda: could have been better, structure was good except for one stretched line, flow was mainly on point, punches was hitting just enought to out measure dflow's, a few good meta's, not really any personals, u should add some cause they help, liked the mangled body line, opener was ok, closer was ok, expand ya vocab, ya had aight wordplay, ya verse seemed based on killing him somewhat, try basing the future ones on the opponets flaws and shit, basically talk about them, keep elevatin, 5/10


Dflow: did like ya verse at all, gun play is so played and way to much self-glorification, structure was fucked up, had some nice rhymes schemes, wasn't feeling "the realest next to run dmc" that line, ya verse also focused on talking about killing so much, gun talk is played, aim ya verse at the persons flaws, ok meta's, flow was off and on, punches wasn't really hitting, could have been alot better, elevate alot kid, 2/10


vote - Streetryda


return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate

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17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

Voted For: streetryda

Street ryda got this.....

You had bettter flow and better Punches......
I like your structure with this ... i was nice and easy to read through..... same for theflow...

You had some alright wordplay.....
Some nice multis i saw in there....

Dflow...

You werent that hot..... I didnt like your structure... it was terrible... i could barley understand it....
and your wordplay was alright...... and your lines were too short.......

And the way you stayed on one ending sound for every word..... I HATE THAT>>
that bugs me cuz you cant really say shit.... you just get worried on what to say next that rhymes/.....

PeAcE oUt~~~~~

Well Return tha fava!!\/ \/ \/ \/

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Ill Emcee

uppin on this explained vote thanks for explainin it mayne....peace~1

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