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Old 10-20-04, 06:41 PM   #1
Abraxas
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On Someone Elses Hands

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On Someone Else’s Hands

I thought my real mom has giving me birth but that’s a lie
Figuring out that im actually adopted, stop it I don’t know why?
I never got any clue of this matter, and fuck, I don’t agree.
I though she was my real mom, the way she used to hold me.
Then whom can I get used to this shit, I was raised by them
It’s like a growing plant, and bond, but just broke its stem.
Now I’m thinking, since im adopted, is my sister adopted too?
Cause when I told her I think im adopted, she said that’s not true.
But I never remembered being adopted maybe I was a baby.
Though I remember got picked up by a stranger, a young lady.
This can’t be true, I thought that my life wasn’t this confusing.
I don’t find this amusing, cant think, which parent, am I choosing?
So this is bullshit, next time you should tell me when im young.
Cause this is shocking me, the way im breathing hard in my lung.
I’m stuck with matters in my mind why didn’t anyone just tell.
Thinking, “this is hell” It’s like my minds locked up in a jail cell.
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a 35 min key.... and came from a topical battle....
i want feedbacks.. and yea.. this is gotta be my worst piece
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Old 10-20-04, 10:01 PM   #2
Abraxas
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bump...........
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Old 10-22-04, 06:20 AM   #3
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diz wuz nice da vocab n flow wuz tite az hell
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