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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
:::..D | O | P | E | M | A | N..::: 2 28.57%
yte grl 5 71.43%
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Old 10-17-04, 05:58 PM   #16
Dabatos
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Voted For: yte grl

lmao..this was a good battle..

dopeman: lol, yo dope, is this really your best? cuz u let a girl wit a rec of 2-12 kill you..lmao.. you really got to work on personals, cuz she really kiilled you wit em..lmao

score:
flow: 6/10 your flow was alrite man, but really work on the good syllables <if dats how u spell it
structure: 7/10 damn, this is so easy to do, y can't u make it look good?
punches: 4/10, really, you could do better i think, lets just say your structures better then ur punches..lol
vocab:4/10, yes work on them, that makes the verse sound better...
total:21/40 (thats called an F where i live lol)

Grl: damn, i've never seen you before, but you came out of no where, you pretty good, i really wanna battle you ... your personals basiclly killed him..

score:
punch: 7/10, they were alrite, but it didn't matter in dis battle..you'll see why...
flow: 8/10 very good flow, i never had to stop the whole time..
personals: 9/10..damn these cracked me up, finally someone uses a personal, n the person dat uses it is someone i never seen wow..lol..
structure: 8/10 its okay structure, atleast it flowed well..
total: 32/40( thats a B where I live i belive )

vote: grl
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Old 10-17-04, 06:11 PM   #17
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lol thats no girl
its ''zig zag'' pretendin to be a girl
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Old 10-17-04, 06:18 PM   #18
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i know for a fact its not zig zag lol
just take ur loss homie
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Old 10-17-04, 06:20 PM   #19
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n i aint hatin u came half ass and u paid for it
dont underestimate ppl cause u know all good emcees elevate
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Old 10-17-04, 06:24 PM   #20
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lol, it is zig zag
dont be so fuckin stupid u dumb fuck
check the record
i lose all the time
i never complain
but..
its fuckin zig zag!
an i'm 4-2 up, why yall so concerned anyway?
why ay stickin up for zig zag?
why vote on ONLY THIS Battle in all of the battle i ever had?
yall some cheats OR SOMTHIN, i dunno whats goin on
all i know is zig zag likes to pretend to be a girl an yall were gonna vote for him no matter how the verses were
i admit
zig zag dropped a nice verse, if i knew it was zig zag, maybe i would have used personals
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Old 10-17-04, 06:29 PM   #21
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i bet u all my rapperz money its not zig zag cause i know who it is
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Old 10-17-04, 06:36 PM   #22
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::

DopeMan:
k you had wack stucture but you had nice punches and flow i liked your dope punches and i kow its zig zap lol hes just wishing he was a gurl so he can enjoy that fat pussy he wont take car eof haha..but no ahte but yes dopeman you came harder you had nice ass punches and vocabulary you ahd nice shit man..8/10 coulda been better

Zig Zag aka Yte Grl..:
k whats with that k um nice punches not as good as dopemans but yes you did have dope fuckin stucture and lines nice way of sayin shit about crews n shit...its was nice..i wouldent give you the nicest shit ever but ive seen better from you...yoru flow was aight alot better then dopes but he just had hot punches...7.8/10

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Old 10-18-04, 01:47 PM   #23
yte grl
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upping for votes.

Let's finish this battle fairly
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Old 10-18-04, 07:13 PM   #24
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This was feedback posted for yte grl

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just checkin.............nuff said.......................................
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Old 10-22-04, 08:57 PM   #25
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uppin' for votes.....................................
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Old 10-22-04, 10:07 PM   #26
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yte was aight her hits were not to hard but i liked how she had some personals in there, and i really liked the line about a slut in church mad tight.
dop came harder than yte the first line was tight, starting with a good first liner is always important and then killin it at the end and dop did that to or atleast harder than yte . i like a few of dops llines here is one to show for it:
"your texts spark a pop up sayin ''unknown command!''.."
that was tight one line i didnt like though was:
"you dont wanna battle, you wanna fuck..
which is just as well cause like a lollipop, slut, you fuckin suck!"
i understand it was a diss but it was to plain and im sure you knew that but hell you gonna win anyways.
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Old 10-23-04, 12:16 AM   #27
yte grl
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notice the only ppl that vote for u are new or suck ass lol
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Old 10-31-04, 01:57 AM   #28
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uppin get this shit closed...........................................
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Old 01-21-05, 09:39 PM   #29
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Voted For: yte grl

yte grl took this one...punches were hard and landed, the structure was in place, the vocab was aight, and the persona's were good, overall u had a decent drop though

Dopeman..ur punches could've been a little harder though, some of them hardly landed though, but overall u came less hard in this battle though
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Old 01-29-05, 11:35 AM   #30
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uppin this it hasnt been voted on in months lol
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