uppin for some fucking honest explained votes peeps

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Voted For: Banks

imma give this to eye:

lethal lunatic: ya structure was good. flow was umm ok. ya had some pretty weak attempts at punches. also when i started reading the G-G-G-G line, i thought u might of finished it off well. but again a weak attempt at a personal.
I think you need to work on ya wordplay n metas too. i dunno if you were tryna do sumfin with tha chokehold line. it could of bin wprded better to make a successful meta. no hate.

Eyedentikal: ok nice structure, almost perfect. nice punches. you had alot of metas here too. really nice ones:-
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^nice metas...
links were usefull too. although i would try to cut them out in battles. 1 or 2 maybe but don't go over the top. Just a thought. but its your verse.

Ok imma giving this to eye for harder punches and better usage of metas.

Vote: eye

Return tha favour please.

Voted For: Banks

Sortin it out...

i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^^^ One of my favorite verses. a lot of wordplay and good vocab. Metas were good, i didn't see any multis. Punches landed and persoanls were good if you check the linkss. 8/10

Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old
Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold
^^It show taht your young. No good metas at all, the second line sounds a lot like a verse from d12. No multis that were good. That and that don't count as a multi. FLow was good.
5/10


Return the favor

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do you even get the whole line wit bucks and young buck

young buck= young thug/ and the member of g unit
Banks= him and the member of g-unit bitch

Speaking of forced wordplay to the max..

Lmao.. Wow.

Voted For: Banks

Lethal Lunatic’s Verse
This worthless punk ass bitch trying to flick me off
Pussy, trying to be hard so he tries to walk how G’s walk
^nice openor

G-G-G-G, why you stuttering are you scared
So if you’re a pussy put ya hands in the air
^lol…nice 1

Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old
Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold
^…ok…

Damn dawg wen will ya get it, ya fucking worthless
The heat I pack is powerful and you’re just hurt less
^haha….NO

So fuck it I’ll cast slap, this rookie and leave the past back
My wordplay who has that?, no one should ask that
^pretty decent

Will you die or ride, on the G side, or just hide
Cuz I know deep down inside, you’re a pussy in and outside
^…okay hea too…

Rookie of September thats bullshit cuz ya rhymes is wack
Cuz every time you take 1 step front, you take 3 steps back
^decent closer

Banks’ Verse
kid nobody feels ya like paralysis victims recieving lethal injections
u could be the child of a minister or jesus and still not see perfection
^nice opener

i thought i recognized ya, this kid is the band-aid off nelly's cheek
ll u wouldn't get noticed even if u had laryngitis and attempted to speak
^nice punch

u probably use to racking up wins by several battles with disqualifications
a funeral? he's gonna die cause my bars run him over like vice city hatians
^haha…anotha nice punch hea too

this kids gonna say i'm gay but vote for me and then want the vote taken
does anyone wanna see a pic of lethal go look at the sig made by forsaken
^decent

i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^pretty nice hea too

ya career seems to be falling quicker then 80 yr old men running marathons
and u beating me is just like chemotherapy patients going to hair salons
^an ‘okay’ punch hea…

come on now stop it, this boys must be a fag cause he stalks my threads
so ya career is done like the future of illegal immigrants caught by feds
^pretty nice punch hea

this kids ego is probably really overwhelming, knock him down a few notches
but lethal showing any skills is like arm amputee's wearing two watches
^nice closer


Overall
Banks took this one…
Just had harder punches than
L.L. …had a better flow & all…
But mostly Banks gets my vote
Cuz he had harder punches than
L.L. …Pz

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you a bitch you changed everything after I spit my verse where is ya sig where is ya title i dissed you on and you are wack you biatch