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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
warrior | 5 | 71.43% | |
*murkage* | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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10-27-04, 11:47 PM | #31 | |
THE CHAMP IS HERE
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IP: 5681 D9BC
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10-28-04, 01:00 PM | #32 | |
THE CHAMP IS HERE
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IP: CFF3 BCF9
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WHOS NEXT TO MAKE THE MERK LIST: R.I.P. verbal vision (1988-2004) techniquess aka judicial (???-2004) *murkage* (1988-2004) notorious verses aka technical (1986-2004) blanko (1984-2004) king~~dipset aka scareface (1990-2004) rymhereaper (1987- 2004) jon shells (1985-2005) ryda (???-2005) |
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10-29-04, 03:28 PM | #33 | |
THE CHAMP IS HERE
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IP: 6F96 1D65
uppin................
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AFTER YOU BATTLE ME JUST STOP DROP AND ROLL
WHOS NEXT TO MAKE THE MERK LIST: R.I.P. verbal vision (1988-2004) techniquess aka judicial (???-2004) *murkage* (1988-2004) notorious verses aka technical (1986-2004) blanko (1984-2004) king~~dipset aka scareface (1990-2004) rymhereaper (1987- 2004) jon shells (1985-2005) ryda (???-2005) |
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10-29-04, 08:30 PM | #34 | |
THE CHAMP IS HERE
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IP: C1AF 9DFE
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AFTER YOU BATTLE ME JUST STOP DROP AND ROLL
WHOS NEXT TO MAKE THE MERK LIST: R.I.P. verbal vision (1988-2004) techniquess aka judicial (???-2004) *murkage* (1988-2004) notorious verses aka technical (1986-2004) blanko (1984-2004) king~~dipset aka scareface (1990-2004) rymhereaper (1987- 2004) jon shells (1985-2005) ryda (???-2005) |
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11-01-04, 02:17 PM | #35 | |
THE CHAMP IS HERE
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IP: 6C7E 6D6B
up up and away.
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AFTER YOU BATTLE ME JUST STOP DROP AND ROLL
WHOS NEXT TO MAKE THE MERK LIST: R.I.P. verbal vision (1988-2004) techniquess aka judicial (???-2004) *murkage* (1988-2004) notorious verses aka technical (1986-2004) blanko (1984-2004) king~~dipset aka scareface (1990-2004) rymhereaper (1987- 2004) jon shells (1985-2005) ryda (???-2005) |
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11-09-04, 08:02 PM | #36 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 218A A214
Voted For: warrior
*murkage*: ummm....1st bar was a self-glorification line and not a good starter completely wack. 2nd bar was not all that great not really feeling the gun lines at all. 3rd= decent. 4th bar was like ummm.... a filler not great pretty played at all points both lines....overall: 3/10 blah i'm harsh what can i say warrior: 1st bar was ish...nah mean pretty played changing peeps name like that atleast. 2nd= was whack as hell i don't want to be rude or anything i'm just saying it as it is. 3rd bar ummm....was probably your best line i was liking it a bit....final was ummm filler like...overall: 5/10 vote: warrior
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11-10-04, 06:42 PM | #37 | |
just a rapper
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IP: 98B5 178F
Voted For: *murkage*
murkage gets my vote for more punchlines and a better vocabulary. keep elevating warrior and up your vocabulary and maybe you will be worth something.NO HATE.just an honest vote.return tha favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150885
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11-11-04, 04:26 PM | #38 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 0905 33CF
Voted For: warrior
Breakdown. murkage: fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars ^weak opener, very played and unoriginal. Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked ^ ok second line, no personal or hard punch, just a filler line. Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe- Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru ^this bar was probly the best in your verse but still weak. your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you*** ^shit closer, weak, played and unoriginal. murkage work on your punches and try to work on throwing personals in your verse. warrior: battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/ dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage) ^good opener, nice personal, not too original of a concept but it works. murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/ u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/ ^lol this line made me line, good punch but the second line has been used often but its still really dope. see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/ cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/ ^weakest line in your verse but decent nonetheless. dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/ dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/ ^Good punch and closer your verse was definatly better. Overall warrior takes this for having a better solid verse.murkage you know what you need to work on and I hope you will achieve thatin the future. V/Warrior. return the fav. |
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11-17-04, 05:04 PM | #39 | ||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: 9405 C60B
Voted For: warrior
battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/ dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage) ^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/ u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK PUNCH DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/ cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT GOOD PUNCH CREATIVITY THERE dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/ dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH WARRIOR- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES WORDPLAYS AND WORK ON YA FLOW MAYNE fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH DOESNT MAKE SENSE Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked ^^^^^^^^^^^ TOO BASIC AND PLAYED Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe- Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru ^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH 'OK' FLOW your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you*** ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA MURKAGE- "OK" YA VERSE WAS TOO BASIC NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES "OK" FLOW BUT CHA PUNCHES KINDA LACKED AND BAISC OVERALL= WARRIOR GETS MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW WARRIOR- HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES JUST EDGE DA BATTLE TO GET MY VOTE PLUS DA WORDPLAY MURKAGE- YA VERSE KINDA LACKED NOT AN GOOD ONE WORK ON CREATING MORE PUNCHES MAKE DEM HARDER USE PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY
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