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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
blackwell 2 28.57%
K9 5 71.43%
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Old 11-20-04, 01:09 PM   #1
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K9 vs blackwell

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Old 11-20-04, 03:43 PM   #2
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blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 03:43 PM.
 
Old 11-20-04, 04:25 PM   #3
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Ayo I'll watch u explode coz on da mic I lay mines
I slave rhymes n this cats mums a dog...she even called her son k9
n when he spits he got no ones blessin so i guess he's unholy
his wack so it dun take guessin ta realise he's always 1 level below-me(fly-weight)
N when I step up I always retrieve eligable kills
n swappin ya genes only way you'll inherit incredible skills
Your a waste of space n ya far from perfect
n this is like expensive clothes coz u just aint worth-it
This was a typed verse with in a matter of minutes
now he looks even worse coz his been splattered n finished
PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 11-20-04, 05:34 PM   #4
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K9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 05:34 PM.
 
Old 11-20-04, 05:57 PM   #5
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I'll rape this bitch, I'll leave this chump up in bruises ..
Double my skill?
.................You've Only Doubled 6 Win's To 12 Losses.
Blackwell, Stop Boasting about Being Black, Well See This
You could only beat whites.. If it was CUMING out Ya penis.
Believe this, being wack in text really - dont count.
& It's sad
...the only thing Big about you.. Is your post count
Fuck this is imbrassing 8 Months here & no one adores you
& shiiit I Would Say your Weak.. But your verse did it for you.
Your dope really, Nah that's just in ya minds state
the closest you were gangsta.. Is dating "The game" on Blind Date
 
Old 11-20-04, 06:39 PM   #6
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Voted For: K9

ha ha ha this was a funny battle

blackwell - u had a good verse..u had some personals..not really any hard punches..ur flow was ok but some of ur lines werent even..ur closer was really weak though...overall - 6/10

k9 - funny verse from you..your opener was creative and hit kinda hard..ur had a good flow and structure..some funny lines like the closer..i like the line about him beating whites...overall - 7/10


vote - k9
 
Old 11-20-04, 07:02 PM   #7
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ite up this.............................................. ..................................................
 
Old 11-21-04, 09:47 AM   #8
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Upin
FuCkIn
TuckIn
ChuCkIn........................

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Old 11-21-04, 03:39 PM   #9
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Voted For: K9

I'll rape this bitch, I'll leave this chump up in bruises ..
Double my skill?
.................You've Only Doubled 6 Win's To 12 Losses.
…decent
Blackwell, Stop Boasting about Being Black, Well See This
You could only beat whites.. If it was CUMING out Ya penis.
…nice
Believe this, being wack in text really - dont count.
& It's sad
...the only thing Big about you.. Is your post count
…eh..don’t use tha same last words 2 times in 1 punch
Fuck this is imbrassing 8 Months here & no one adores you
& shiiit I Would Say your Weak.. But your verse did it for you.
…same comment above
Your dope really, Nah that's just in ya minds state
the closest you were gangsta.. Is dating "The game" on Blind Date
…decent

Ayo I'll watch u explode coz on da mic I lay mines
I slave rhymes n this cats mums a dog...she even called her son k9
…decent
n when he spits he got no ones blessin so i guess he's unholy
his wack so it dun take guessin ta realise he's always 1 level below-me(fly-weight)
no…
N when I step up I always retrieve eligable kills
n swappin ya genes only way you'll inherit incredible skills
…meh okay
Your a waste of space n ya far from perfect
n this is like expensive clothes coz u just aint worth-it
…no here
This was a typed verse with in a matter of minutes
now he looks even worse coz his been splattered n finished
Okay…decent closer

K9 took this one…had harder punches that landed
A nice flow, a decent structure..and a okay vocab…
BlackWell yo shit was all-that…tha punches were weak
And tha structure was in place tho…but work on yo punches
Tho…

Pz.
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Old 11-21-04, 06:10 PM   #10
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^

There's nothing wrong with using the same last words as lon as the one before is different . . But you aint on my level so blah.
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Old 11-25-04, 12:01 AM   #11
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Voted For: K9

aight k9 got this battle

bwell-aight you had some decent punches but you just came weaker and your structure was really bad........work on that...you had no personals really....vocab was weak....flowed good.....but put multi;s in so then that way your flow sounds better..fix up ur structure...use better vocab and think out ur punches more so they are more direct.....

k9-aight u came with harder punches....yous structure was a lot better than blackwell's and you had a lil humor in your verse..i like that......you had good flow but also try and put multi's in there to help it some.....you didnt have that much of a better vocab than blackwell.....but you got this cuz you had better personals and better punches.....

best lines
k9-Blackwell, Stop Boasting about Being Black, Well See This
You could only beat whites.. If it was CUMING out Ya penis.
Believe this, being wack in text really - dont count.
& It's sad
...the only thing Big about you.. Is your post count
Your dope really, Nah that's just in ya minds state
the closest you were gangsta.. Is dating "The game" on Blind Date

bwell-n when he spits he got no ones blessin so i guess he's unholy
his wack so it dun take guessin ta realise he's always 1 level below-me

return the favor links in sig honest explained
peace~1
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Old 12-15-04, 07:43 AM   #12
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Thanks for the votes......
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Old 12-15-04, 08:02 AM   #13
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Quote:
Originally Posted by K9
^

There's nothing wrong with using the same last words as lon as the one before is different . . But you aint on my level so blah.



w/e kid...
i dont wanna be on ur low level
fuck off...

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Old 12-15-04, 02:58 PM   #14
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Voted For: blackwell

Both Were Pretty Weak...
But The Other Kid Had The Most OVIOUS Punches Ever...
Atleast Black Had A Few Original Shots Thrown...
And Blacks Structure/Flow Was More Consistant...
Alot Of 9's Ish Didnt Even Rhym Right...
.One.
 
Old 12-17-04, 04:43 PM   #15
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Voted For: K9

basically K9 took this one

blackwells opener was dope and then it went downhill from there he had some OK punches but nothing that jumped off the page......... decent structure could have definately been alot better... decent wordplay and personals

overall: 5.5/10

K9: your opener was also good not as good as blackwells but still dope... u were more consistent with the punches and wordplay so thats why you get my vote... better structure and better flow overall

overall : 7.5/10

vote: K9
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