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Check in by: 11-23-04 at 09:29 AM

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Pimpjuice has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 09:00 AM.

PheNom897 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 09:04 AM.

this "phenom" thinks he's a "phenomenon"
but he jus a "pheen" fa suckin dick and gettin creamed on
so look at what kind of bum youve become
niggas bust in ya "ear" so you can "hear" where dey "cummin" from
o behave young one it wont be fun to be brave
cuz ya flo couldnt be "off da chain" if you was a runaway slave
see ill eat u and shit you out my ass like "doo doo"
u aint kno, i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude
da raps ova theres no way u gettin back at me
i caused a "phenomenon" by showin dis "phenom" a "catastrophe"

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Its tool time n this ain't home improvement...
n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it...
If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it...
You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent...
Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth...
I suggest you get a mean tux cuz you goin in a black hearse wit tents...
My verse never relents, cuz thats not an option...
Might as well go to free agents cuz I'm whats popin...
Just check tha sig son I told you I was a banger...
ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger...
so keep ya mouth on silencer cuz you got nothin thats fiyah to say...
PheNom tha nu king ya games over dog so retire ya ways...

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Voted For: PheNom897

Its tool time n this ain't home improvement...
n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it...
If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it...
You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent...
Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth...
I suggest you get a mean tux cuz you goin in a black hearse wit tents...
My verse never relents, cuz thats not an option...
Might as well go to free agents cuz I'm whats popin...
Just check tha sig son I told you I was a banger...
ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger...
so keep ya mouth on silencer cuz you got nothin thats fiyah to say...
PheNom tha nu king ya games over dog so retire ya ways...
8/10

I liked ya wordplay,stucture and ya shit flowed good shit man

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this "phenom" thinks he's a "phenomenon"
but he jus a "pheen" fa suckin dick and gettin creamed on
so look at what kind of bum youve become
niggas bust in ya "ear" so you can "hear" where dey "cummin" from
o behave young one it wont be fun to be brave
cuz ya flo couldnt be "off da chain" if you was a runaway slave
see ill eat u and shit you out my ass like "doo doo"
u aint kno, i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude
da raps ova theres no way u gettin back at me
i caused a "phenomenon" by showin dis "phenom" a "catastrophe"
7/10

Aight you had punces that were ok -doodoo punches are wack stay away from them
Vocab was aight too

Good battle guys

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