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11-24-04, 12:16 AM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP:
Sdizzle:
hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it not a bad opener. and i can see why..... not only is his future dark i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start seen=saw, dialogue check. man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv what? u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business and god the king of the wack.. ...& this rulers still short a couple inches eh okay. a bit jumbly. ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d punch was there, but worded all wrong. *gave great effort, ya spent some time on punches, needed better personals. ya wordplay was lacking and there were a few parts ya lines didnt make sense (dialogue/tone). dont sweat it, overall decent read. God: RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite [b]good set up. good punch. vocab? So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth? His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too nice. God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry lol. decent set up. Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat lol. good comedy. So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight! lmao. nice closure. *personals and punches were good, wordplay and structure were decent. no vocab. ya still win. good read. vote: God
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