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11-28-04, 09:06 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
u p p i n
T H I S s h i t..... ...............
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11-28-04, 09:13 PM
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New to RB
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 8E70 C31B
checkin the stats.. ..............................
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11-28-04, 11:08 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin number 2
c',mon people .................
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11-29-04, 08:17 PM
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 7975 32E9
i liked how your font color went with its poetry.....
i aint gonna vote cos you both were even
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11-29-04, 09:35 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin number 3
yes vote vote vote ........ ...... ...... ..........
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11-29-04, 11:36 PM
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
Voted For: Empire
damn... i gotta give it to my arrogant, cocky, but still a kool muhfukka as far as i'm concerned homie Empire on this one....lol...j/p man... don't start a hate thread on me :thumb up: shit... i hope i did that right.... any ways... the emotion in this piece was of the heezy!!! everything flowed so well from one line to the next... i liked the free-verse style chosen for this... no need for a rhyme scheme when shyt gets as passionate as this one was... the use of the colors to signify the water, and burning desires, and the black for the thunder/lightening was a nice touch... whoever woulda thought empire was a softie?....lol Valor... good verse... but... i think you tried too hard by forcing ya lines to rhyme... it's not necessary in all poetry pieces... the topic is strong enough to do with out it... not saying that it can't be done with rhyme; i just felt that you didn't bring it together tight enough... some lines started off really well and then faltered with the false need to rhyme every line.... i believe that was ya only flaw... everything else looked pretty good to me... but that's just my opinion... no hate... i just thought E had a better drop this time around |
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11-30-04, 12:24 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
word yeah props this time around empire
uppin number 4 p.s i still think i won  ...hehe!
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11-30-04, 09:17 AM
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Back In Business
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IP: 9227 0965
just recheckin the stats...that about it ... it was a good battle
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12-01-04, 12:59 AM
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This was feedback posted for Valor
IP: 0825 899A
This was feed left for both, i'm just checkin the polls and complimenting you guys on dope poems....1
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12-04-04, 04:56 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin number 5.......
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12-04-04, 05:30 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: Empire
k i like how u told ppl about dat stuation and how u expressed it plus those details were very good in your poetry it was tight and how u told people fire as it slowly burns u was a tight ass line the other guy needs to get a little more help in poetry then u got it aight!! Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
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12-10-04, 09:23 PM
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God is a Fable.
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This was feedback posted for Valor
IP: B20F 67F7
just checking the poles homo since if i voted it would be crew
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