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12-01-04, 08:56 PM | #1 | |||||||
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To all those who talk shit, READ THIS
IP: A899 6CF4
Yea, this that fresh south nigga reppin the V.T. Trust me, you don't want beef just be relaxed and easy Because if neccasary, i'll run through your crew alphabetically And yes, that's A to Z, but this all just hyphothetically Speaking, sharp words from the dome will leave your organs leaking I can destroy your brain and leave your body here reaking Or we can handle this like men and talk it all out But words eventually turn to insults and insults to shouts And the result of that is usually crew battles and crew bouts But what am I saying, i'm poppin off at the mouth Lets just say fuckin with V.T. is one word, crucial Meaning that the end result will be the opposite of boostful Thats a matter of fact, which means its real and not an act The niggas i roll wit operate similar to a wolf pack Jump on one of us and the whole squad switches modes to attack Just remember that, before you get stupid and let yo jaws flap Take this as warning, so no one sets their own death trap Stay cool, stay back, and your cranium will be left intact The effect of a lyrical war is crack, it'll ruin your career So don't jump in the game man, just watch from afar and cheer
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12-02-04, 10:37 AM | #2 | |||||||
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uppin this bastard, i shoulda named the title "I'll love you forever", so somebody would actually read it
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12-02-04, 10:40 AM | #3 | |||||
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I read it, It's still weak as ur crew's....Man u guys need 2 elevate
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12-02-04, 10:45 AM | #4 | |||||||
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whateva homie, it was just a warnin and now you see what happens when you diss V.T., all these disses comin at you
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12-02-04, 11:02 AM | #5 | |||
freeze
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it was a good drop had sum good vocab an flowed well........keep droppin those open mic's fam.........
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12-02-04, 11:40 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 597C 067D
appreciate the feedback, uppin for some more
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12-02-04, 11:45 AM | #7 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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Yea, this that fresh south nigga reppin the V.T.
Trust me, you don't want beef just be relaxed and easy Because if neccasary, i'll run through your crew alphabetically And yes, that's A to Z, but this all just hyphothetically ^^^^^^^^^heaviest partof entire drop...........you opened HOT but then kind of fell off , but ddidnt damage drop 2 much....... vocab-7.5/10 lyrics- 7/10 punches - 8/10 originality -9/10 flow-8.5/10 wordplay - 3/10 structure- 6/10 crew representation - 10/10 overall - 8/10 keep em comin nigga chek ma battle against terse n ma topicals n open mic.Peace
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12-02-04, 11:45 AM | #8 | |||||||
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hot yo....Lyke JR said, good vocab and flow....keep it coming fam..to up ya metas and punches....i was def feelin it...
-return tha favor pls...*its in my siggy*...
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12-02-04, 04:31 PM | #9 | |||||||
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appreciate the feed homie, i'm a check out yo drop, upppppin
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