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Old 12-01-04, 08:56 PM   #1
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To all those who talk shit, READ THIS

IP: A899 6CF4

Yea, this that fresh south nigga reppin the V.T.
Trust me, you don't want beef just be relaxed and easy
Because if neccasary, i'll run through your crew alphabetically
And yes, that's A to Z, but this all just hyphothetically
Speaking, sharp words from the dome will leave your organs leaking
I can destroy your brain and leave your body here reaking
Or we can handle this like men and talk it all out
But words eventually turn to insults and insults to shouts
And the result of that is usually crew battles and crew bouts
But what am I saying, i'm poppin off at the mouth
Lets just say fuckin with V.T. is one word, crucial
Meaning that the end result will be the opposite of boostful
Thats a matter of fact, which means its real and not an act
The niggas i roll wit operate similar to a wolf pack
Jump on one of us and the whole squad switches modes to attack
Just remember that, before you get stupid and let yo jaws flap
Take this as warning, so no one sets their own death trap
Stay cool, stay back, and your cranium will be left intact
The effect of a lyrical war is crack, it'll ruin your career
So don't jump in the game man, just watch from afar and cheer
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Old 12-02-04, 10:37 AM   #2
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uppin this bastard, i shoulda named the title "I'll love you forever", so somebody would actually read it
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Old 12-02-04, 10:40 AM   #3
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I read it, It's still weak as ur crew's....Man u guys need 2 elevate
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Old 12-02-04, 10:45 AM   #4
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whateva homie, it was just a warnin and now you see what happens when you diss V.T., all these disses comin at you
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Old 12-02-04, 11:02 AM   #5
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it was a good drop had sum good vocab an flowed well........keep droppin those open mic's fam.........
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Old 12-02-04, 11:40 AM   #6
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appreciate the feedback, uppin for some more
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Old 12-02-04, 11:45 AM   #7
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Yea, this that fresh south nigga reppin the V.T.
Trust me, you don't want beef just be relaxed and easy
Because if neccasary, i'll run through your crew alphabetically
And yes, that's A to Z, but this all just hyphothetically

^^^^^^^^^heaviest partof entire drop...........you opened HOT
but then kind of fell off , but ddidnt damage drop 2 much.......

vocab-7.5/10
lyrics- 7/10
punches - 8/10
originality -9/10
flow-8.5/10
wordplay - 3/10
structure- 6/10
crew representation - 10/10

overall - 8/10

keep em comin nigga
chek ma battle against terse n ma topicals n open mic.Peace
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Old 12-02-04, 11:45 AM   #8
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hot yo....Lyke JR said, good vocab and flow....keep it coming fam..to up ya metas and punches....i was def feelin it...

-return tha favor pls...*its in my siggy*...
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Old 12-02-04, 04:31 PM   #9
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appreciate the feed homie, i'm a check out yo drop, upppppin
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