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Old 12-04-04, 10:29 PM   #1
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The Streets Got Intelligents(Best Open Mic Of 2005)

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Intro-this is for all the real niggas in the street and in Hip Hop,for people in the struggle and pain.feel me on this

Inflicted pain,they thought black people brains was drained/
die Nigger die,was what they ye'll when all the panthers got slain/
my trigger finger killer,my life touchin the page,
we started taken back the streets so they locked us all in the cage/
scriptures of a dark past,mind solid with rage/
they watchin me,phones tapped they wana invaid,
MC'S reflect the streets,and craft,concrete and roads we pave/
R.I.S.E.like thoughts of life,heavens or like a box in a grave/
i bet i touch down on niggas,let em know im the chosen leader
but still follow your own way/

(system of a damn)

look world we gotta stand and push/,some of us voted(why)we still got fucked by bush/
they got plans for minorities,ya better start pickin up books/
cuz they see us as black skin,monkeys and crooks
we all god's children,but? why do we get over looked/
damn son!im sick of this shit!,mad people focused on chains N whips/
get a grip,its all a illusion,lost souls get tossed in abyss/
hell flames,and fire, eternal death attached to your skins/
my rhymes is like punch in a jaw,(suckers got glass chins)
you fuckers rate ya proceeds by text wins?i get deep in culture
try to better my sins(wash em away?).
at first i cared for our soldiers,but they killin for no reason
but they the most dead,BUSH PLAN IS ALL OVER/
im writting this sober,see the bible told ya,so ima given you
the facts(look in the eyes of the beholder)
enemies is evil,therefore so in the condemed i have to toss ya/

(Born with this)
from the time we was born,we got injected with pain,
no life for blacks,little siblings wit half a brain
(what im saying)is that we never had a chanced,
wit the devil on a moonless night in a dance(deep)
but fuck sellin my soul,i just started gettin cold
i said god let me crush weak m'cs and this was told?/

(god)my child,your words is wild/,but seek heaven enlightment
and you can change the crowd/
he said be a brush R.I.S.E.and paint a new picture in they cloud
start but guiden,strong lyrcist,a team thats foul
enjoy this music of the world,aim high(but do it now)
but before i go neel son and give praise thru a bow)

The Prayer)

forgive me lord for i have sin,i started beef with niggas on
here,but shit i would do it again/
thats hip hop,But in a positive way
(god)one touch of me,your sins have been tossed away,now go
finish the strive,your truely a warrior,i give you a new name
..............the skyrbe...AMEN

just thoughts that i keep locked in,just sharing them wit the real mc's if you feel you feel me,if not...God Bless...1luv


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I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

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Old 12-04-04, 11:12 PM   #2
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I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

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Old 12-05-04, 01:43 AM   #3
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this was pretty good drop. well worded and i felt ur message. im over the lifes so hard for blacks stuff but if thats where your at then bro i dont have nething to say about that. it was a good drop neway. Tupac says in brendas Got A Baby that just coz u in the ghetto doesnt mean u cant get up. sumthin along those lines neway. bro subtract the negative and make room for the positive. but if u can make a good written out of ur pain then by all means go ahead.
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Old 12-05-04, 08:50 AM   #4
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thx,but it is positive,because im talkin for all races,we all go thru struggle and pain,at any time.im just givin em power to survive,even if we livin good,you still got people livin down and out.in the u.s and out.so you gotta give back kid...thx for the respect.

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I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

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Old 12-08-04, 12:43 AM   #5
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I paint pictures with a deep mind and draw lines/that become rhymes,black words with clear thought true weapons retire nines/
my styles hostile like 2 lions,
then i rip mc's that be lien when they rhymen
rise heat the rap game like crackpots lyrics stay fryin/

overral battle record,18-12-10-k.o.
G.L.C.God's Lyrical Crew
We murder any mc' in any crew and any crew with a MIC...

R.I.S.E. the illest mc,death to mc's that ain't down wit me/

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