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12-06-04, 02:35 PM | #1 | |||||||
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In the eyes of A......
IP: 11AF 50EC
Suspense. Mystery, thriller, a plan
Control. Existence, in form of a man Obsolete, haunting, discretely divine Observant, serene, united with time Neutral, solemn, allowing events to unravel Patient, waiting, displaying truth and power As born to live. As sure to die Faith intact, guarded by life To be built up. To be let down To face the sky, or facing the ground Living for the moment, looking ahead To indeed be lost, or at last be found Careful, on guard, always alert In the eyes of A...is this nature to be learned |
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12-07-04, 11:17 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: F2B1 8D50
very nice poem.i liked ur angle a lot in this one.keep up the good work.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-07-04, 02:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 11AF 50EC
lol thanx 4 da feed....uppin
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12-07-04, 04:08 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 0DA5 D7BF
that was a good poem...i like ur style in it .....nice wordplay...keep doin ur thing
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My lyrics stay nothing but nice I use them to bring u down to ur grave after my sacrifice if you KNO ME you cant UNKNO ME unless u wanna DENY ME |
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