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Old 12-06-04, 02:35 PM   #1
Lil C
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In the eyes of A......

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Suspense. Mystery, thriller, a plan
Control. Existence, in form of a man
Obsolete, haunting, discretely divine
Observant, serene, united with time

Neutral, solemn, allowing events to unravel
Patient, waiting, displaying truth and power
As born to live. As sure to die
Faith intact, guarded by life
To be built up. To be let down
To face the sky, or facing the ground

Living for the moment, looking ahead
To indeed be lost, or at last be found
Careful, on guard, always alert
In the eyes of A...is this nature to be learned
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Old 12-07-04, 11:17 AM   #2
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very nice poem.i liked ur angle a lot in this one.keep up the good work.
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Old 12-07-04, 02:14 PM   #3
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lol thanx 4 da feed....uppin
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Old 12-07-04, 04:08 PM   #4
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that was a good poem...i like ur style in it .....nice wordplay...keep doin ur thing
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