nigga i told u form the begining that nobody replies to you
your rhymes suck and nobody fears you isnt that a clear to you
like i told young killa talkin bout moms is elemantry
penitentiary iz where i need to be for this full on assualt
and yes my rhymes do get to you coz u keep wanting to talk
it aint my fault that im elevating quicker than a levitating mediating monk
and that your shit iz junk sound so white it need to b locked n a trunk
fuckin lil punk ikno it aint fair that u cant touch me jus wait till u get sum pubic hair then mayb u woodnt sound so queer
wait...stop..check your pulse r u still breathin am i hittin u too hard buddy
i keep forgetin u a lil kid no bigger than my dick..like a lil stick ill break you
coz yes your breakable my lyrics unmistakable ill leave u for dead until
i realize i got more sympathy than that matta a fact no idont...crrrrrrattttt
comes tha sound from my macc betta yet tha tech get on ur knees before i break ur back
stack ur limbs like im stackin cheese yes u betta believe it its real
i gotta switch to youngkilla cuz he says i steal says im biter prove it nigga
if u cant best beleive imma pull tha trigga he was rite bout sumn though
i defintly am a snake coz my rhymes spits venom i bend em n break em
my shit will have u goin crazy mayb you'll even wake up wit a twitch
this is to young killa but mostly for SR$..REST IN PEACE BITCH

uppiinnnn this muthafucka

upppinnnnnn this

iight man u need to work on ryhmin ya words lil more....u got lil vocab but use it lil better some parts were pretty tight and others i had to read it twice but overall 5/10

dumb flow 0/10, ya need harder punclinez bitch

aight, 1st of all need more vocab, you got too many simple words, then u need to form some sort of structure; ya rhymes are jus runnin all over the place and its hard to tell where the bar ends

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