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Old 12-08-04, 07:25 PM   #1
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BEEF (callin out bitches) vol.1...

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***im gettin tired of this, hopefully this will be my last part in this beef. and dont worry, my nigga youngkilla still gone hit yall wit another one. lets get dis poppin***

(talkin)
damn.....like i said, yall pussies just dont die.....it aint like im not namin names nigga.....im here to KILL shadow and his bitch joker.....case closed muthafucka.....

(verse 1)
HOLY SHIT!
guess this bitch just dont take a hint
he still all on my dick wit his punches, but landed not one hit
he's sorry as shit, thinkin i buckle down under pressure
no
this beef is simple, there is no "drastic-measure" (ha-ha)
he swear up and down dat me and killa aint causin damage
when he know damn well dat we throwin hammers
while you in tha pool, guess who?
yeah you heard that before
too bad i raped yo momma and you was premature
cuz as a sperm you had to swim through her black ass jaws
after fallin out my big ass balls
you'll never hurt us, cuz if you did, we would've been stopped
nigga get shot, stop stealin ryhmes, you should be popped
talkin big like you old, well okay you bitch ass senior citizen
suckin so much dick dat you lungs gotta get re-pumped AGAIN
damn dawg, theres no reason to reply to this
cuz we all know yo responses aint shit but you talkin shit
and the only reason dat i keep respondin to yo shit
is cuz i get so frustrated i gotta type up some shit
you fuckin bitch...and stop e-mailin me yo pictures...faggot (ha!)


(hook)
who tha fuck do you think you talkin to?
you already know who im talkin to...

(repeat 4x)

(verse 2)
okay, verse 2, who im talkin bout
oh yeah, JOKER
tha one dats so unlucky he'll lose in a game of strip poker
cuz he purposily wanna strip naked infront of females
but then they peep his 2" and they go, run and tell
nigga stop while you ahead, believe me, you dont want beef
and when this shit cease, yo thoughts gone literally be on tha streets
even thinkin bout hurtin me?
bring that bullshit to tha D
i dont even need my squad
it'll be me, you, and my D-E
and dats desert eagle you GTA life havin muthafucka
thinkin you can just steal cars and shoot by-standers muthafucka
you a imaginative lil busta
i sit down and actually took some time to read yo lines
you just as bitch as yo boyfriend
now tell that to yo moms
and tell her i'll be over later to beat it up
you on tha internet too much homie, all u must do is beat it up
my flows are endless, your senseless for tha shit you say
me and young got tha macs dat spray
get tha fuck out our way
sluts


(hook 4x)

stop tryin to call me out.....wit yall baby beef flows.....before approachin me, please clean yo nose.....cuz tha drugs yall on is killin off yo thought process.....matter fact.....go back up to tha top, read this over and digest.....fuckin chumps.....get at me later and make me angry!!!!
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Old 12-08-04, 07:28 PM   #2
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yall gotz to give up some feedback on this. its cold as hell kid!!!
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Old 12-08-04, 08:47 PM   #3
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c'mon yall, i need some fuckin feedback from yall. damn, quit lookin, if you aint gone write nothin!!!
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Old 12-08-04, 09:14 PM   #4
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wack...elevate man...no disrespect, but this really wasnt very good...
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Old 12-08-04, 10:15 PM   #5
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fuck the haters son! this was a dope diss i felt your emotion in the flow
thats how a diss should be.not pre written just spittin hard blows at
opposin mc..8/10 keep Rising .to my fellow mc


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Old 12-08-04, 10:21 PM   #6
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Old 12-08-04, 10:22 PM   #7
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since rise replied it sucks but besides dat its aight!
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Old 12-08-04, 10:35 PM   #8
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it was pretty wack...but it was fun to read...

u were inconsistent with ur multies...if ur gonna use em...use gotta keep usin em throughout the whole verse...

3/10
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Old 12-08-04, 11:10 PM   #9
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Yea i agree , it didn't have much to it. There were no good punchlines and the vocab wasn't there
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Old 12-08-04, 11:18 PM   #10
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yo son dat wuz off da chain, datz sick 10/10 ma nigga i gotta come fo em
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Old 12-09-04, 09:39 AM   #11
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thanx.....to everybody.....but i still want more.....im takin notes, and there WILL be a part two!
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