nigga u need to quit dissin stop twisitin my spittin
quit bein jealous it hurts me
it hurts me to see sumone whose so envyious
i know my punches are continueous
but god damn give it a rest
just admit it kid im tha best
tha rest cant test this
my rhymes is golden like piss
make a list of thangs that rhyme
and in time ur lyrics will be fine
tha replies that u get back r weak
tweak ur vocab coz nigga it seem like im runnin a tab
i hit ya chest harder than PCP
coz u cant see me
dog r u lonely do u need me
it seems like you do coz u love talkn to me
i tried endin this beef but u kept comin back
like hairs in my ass crack
my thug mentaility
will put u back into reality
for now im done ive made my point
o yea fuck u and fucc detroit

flow was kinda weak.....
punches was where???
diss'es was ya strong point....
word-play wasnt ya strong-point...

all around weak drop.... 3.0

well ya kno thats y i titled it QUICK DISS

^^^ i aint hate'in on u dogs and i aint say u sucked.....

i said this drop was weak mang...

dont take it to the heart just elevate N make my comment motovate u mang...

turn that fire into a sick-song u feel me........

drop feed back on my oepn mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865

no really, STOP
your only hurtin yoself with this complete garbage. i believe i said dis on yo other thread, retire.....2/10. lucky im a nice nigga and i didnt take that "fuck detroit" easily, i'll let that slide.
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maybe rappin aint yo thing man. try singin some beef my way. and if there is a problem. solve it yoself cuz "BEEF vol.2" was my last cut in this shit. im just talkin to u niggaz now. grow up nigga

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SO DONE WIT RV

lol o so now u wanna bite on wut i say to u..lol fuckin lil kid man..o ya by tha way..................FUCK DETROIT MUTHAFUCKA

Damn kid, no offense but u gotta work on sum stuff
Up the vocab and punchlines
U gettin ya point across very easy, thas good, but try and get it across in a different way, make people think about it for a while
Just keep spittin and u'll get the hang of it.
No hard feelings, keep postin

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