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Check in by: 12-11-04 at 04:01 PM

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fredunlimited333 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 04:02 PM.

A1C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 04:31 PM.

Fred u're dead man, fuckin wit the iLLest Emcee ever
U never 'had a chance' like the kids in the "Land Never"
or neverland got damn like it really matters to me
When standin on G.I. Joes was this guy's highest 'battlin feet'(feat)
Literally facing De-Feet, Fred give up & quit while u still can
just cuz dem 3's on ya name look like tits dont make less of a man
U understand, a win is somethin u were never meant to get
Just like a video game...U can pause this battle & Quit
Fred its done...the unlimited has became limited in this bout
Now u're intrudin on votes dawg....so get the Fuck OUT

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u write a few letters in ur screen name think u wont get ripped
a1 steak sauce with a cunt attachment use tha sauce 2 rub his clit
why people yearning for war? a1c just yearnin sex
he's a faggot, i end lives, so his life's gonna be next
round my way people poppin lip either flee or dissapear
pussy's like to run so its my style to shoot tha back of tha ear
why he wanna battle me? i'm a grown nigga with life goals
a1c allen won cox homo thugs in tha clubs get shot guns tha size of the strip poles
u wanna die? thats an obvious answer why i bother to ask
ur only chance for escape is death then u can cry free at last

Voted For: A1C

Aii This is How i feel

A1C
Your verse was alrii U Lacked the use of personals and multi's but you Did good i Give you my vote bcuz I was feelin your verse

Fred
I think You Need to elevate or do some practice battle then come bac and battle bcuz its like you start doin good then you jus let it go mayne u gotta hold that power throughout ya whole verse Mayne Then Youll when More battles Mayne
(no Hate At all)

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Preciate the vote cuz.....uppin keep em comin fellas

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Voted For: A1C

oooooooooo kinda hard to vote on this battle your both equally matched....

fred you first line was a lil bit stretched but it was funny
you kept on track when you battled and you satyed on point

A your verse had the edge in my opinion you had punches and they hit the right stop... the lines you got it with was...

Literally facing De-Feet, Fred give up & quit while u still can
just cuz dem 3's on ya name look like tits dont make less of a man

made me laugh lol... keep up the good work and keep elevatin

return the favour link in the sig...

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yo vote in my second battle with necro then ill vote on another one of your battles aight... pz. honest votes though yeh??

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Voted For: A1C

your first punchline you had was funny as hell

fred u need to elevate a lil but homie.HOLLA

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Voted For: fredunlimited333

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to A1C flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, FRED had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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