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6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-05-04 at 07:57 PM

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SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 07:58 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-02-04 08:00 PM.

RETRO BUTIONNNNN.....KIDDDDDD
...{COMPLEX}.........
FReeze Extortin-Rap/Got Scip Distorted Like He Snortin-Crack/Cuz Dude Couldn’t SPIT DIRTY If His TEETH Was Sportin-Plaque//
S Thinks He’s Posin-Threats/But JR's The Chosen-Vet/Got U HOLDIN Ya TITS When My Hits Expose-Ya-Chest//
AIGHT PUNCH TIME>>>
I don't ~have tha patience~, so I spit lyrical missiles at this cat's grill and leave him equipped wit facial ~lacerations~/
He almost reaches tha surface, but I'll stop tha flow of his spits quick, like he's gettin kill'd during masturbation//(it's over)
~*~*~*~*~*OOHHHH ~*~*~*~*~*
This ain't for STatus but I'll kick you off ya throne...Next time call me out using ~tha phone~/
Your losin hope, cuz tight ryhmes elude you like a championship ring does ~to Malone~//(murder)
~*~*~*~*~* FINISHER ~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*
~Homez your in trouble~...I spit ~flows on tha double~ so I suggest you hide and ~go for tha covers~/
I made my lines a lil longer THIS TIME but SCip text stretches more than ~yoga instructors~//
.....FATALITY.....
You really dont want beef wit me dog..if you do youll be fuckin dead//
Cuz I spit flames but you couldnt blow smoke(y) if you gave Chris Tucker head./((ooohhhhh Daaammmnnnn))

aight

This cat thinks hes a Violent Type, but dont beleive the hype/
Man this cat cant rhyme his structure like the Wright Brothers 1st Flight/

Ima Freeze this Jr so he sees not to mess wit the master of Keys/
Scip will have ya J.itz R.ed as if ya was beatin down on lease/*( liek not his dick, Dick Rydin)

You think this cat plays pool wit his mouth the way he Ate Balls/
People Booin at him like NBA Refs makin Late Calls, Scip hates yall/

Im freezin this cat more den his computer, here ill give ya a punch tutor/
You could say Im~Kickin~It like little kids on scooters,Your title should be a Rap~Polutor/

Finisher:
This cat cant put up a fight so how he a Violent Type/
You could be the next American Flag the way my punches give ya stripes/


Keyed in 6 minutes

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Illest Warriors

oo i thoughtt his cat was in VT oops my bad mayne shit

you should still get the punches

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Illest Warriors

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

no shit not a hard descion hear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,hahahahah
man u ate this kat up royaly,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,had the illest lines and the phattest structure.........lollol gud shit




FReeze Extortin-Rap/Got Scip Distorted Like He Snortin-Crack/Cuz Dude Couldn’t SPIT DIRTY If His TEETH Was Sportin-Plaque//
S Thinks He’s Posin-Threats/But JR's The Chosen-Vet/Got U HOLDIN Ya TITS When My Hits Expose-Ya-Chest//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ best opena in a long time....aiight yo return the favour in my battles below.........plz

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(X)CeeD

yo no beef aiight jus kloze the shit below plz

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(X)CeeD

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Voted For: SCIP

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to J.R. flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, SCIP had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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