Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
|
12-12-04, 03:30 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
|
a story bout a war
IP:
tha demons lurkin searchin for guidance from me
well im satans son put ur confindance in me see i took ova hell and now tha demons need to feed thinkin to myself smokin weed i think i found a solution indeed tha seed of a pure soul will mold into millions tha feelings i have none so i dont care whose it is i hate kids but tha souljahs need to feast i rise to earth wit my beasts tha canines from death in a heart beat they'll tear ur flesh so dont test spotted tha best soul in a dozen millenia ya i was defintly feelin ha but i had a baby to snatch grabbed tha lil one and i was tickets wit da quickness back to tha underworld and cloned it from one to many now tha family iz ready for tha next war on tha heavens suited up and grabbed my weapons tha sword plus ak47s as tha billion of us were waiting roaring outside tha gates gods angels were peacefully waiting till tha time came silence surrounded us and then an arrow from heaven came now we chargin wings fallen angels droppin from both sides tha tides are finally turning and hell might actually win this tyme but tha time woodnt be mine for long because tha 7 sins were a sign a sign that i was gonna die by tha hands of my army they were jealous of tha power that i held coz i excelled in so many thangs they wanted my blood they cut me shot me slashed me and stomped my face intha mud i was overpowered by tha millions beating me and sum feasting on me i was done i was gone they put me on a crucifix for fun but i wasnt laughin coz a voice came to me and said to me i was goin to heaven to lead tha army to a victory and that this army doesnt belive in tha 7 sins so i disappered into a room full of ladies and gin preparing my self for tomorrows war against my old sins |
|
12-12-04, 03:37 PM | #2 | ||
Flyweight
|
IP:
honestly...
it was gravy til like tha 7th line. yo ryhmin knida fell off after that. i gives it a 5/10. i suggest you go and look back over it and edit. 4real. and i did read tha whole thing and you lost me when you changed sides without notice like dat. yeah...edit plz
__________________
SO DONE WIT RV
|
||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|