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Old 12-13-04, 04:09 PM   #1
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Lightbulb "Lunatic Side"

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Lookin for feedback holla atcha boyeeeee clik the soundclik button
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Old 12-13-04, 06:27 PM   #2
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aiight i checked this

you elevated alot. Im feelin this beat aswell. nice shit. But the Mixing on the hook was horrible. did you try to just lower the beat and raise the vocals. cause i can hear the beat on the sample vocals you tried to do LOL. sall good though. your doing your thang. im feelin the multi's.. some words are hard to hear though. your pronouncing. but sall hood

6.9/10 in my eyes

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Old 12-13-04, 07:54 PM   #3
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appreciated the feedback im havin issues from my track to the one that gets to the fuckin soundclik page two diff sounds completely
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Old 12-13-04, 08:41 PM   #4
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Its my booooooooooooooy! Yea yea. Kids betta not sleep. Ya flow has always been tight. Too comfortable. No wonder no cat'll battle you. So we startin a new crew now that you're back or what? Did you make this beat? Either wya, song is good man. Good looks. 1
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Old 12-13-04, 08:43 PM   #5
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not my beat but im down for a crew holla at me son NO FUCKIN DOUBT
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Old 12-14-04, 10:09 AM   #6
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Old 12-14-04, 12:05 PM   #7
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u no how i feel an crews pimp.....
holla at me....
nice drop im feelin it
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Old 12-14-04, 12:16 PM   #8
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word tony, I told u i was feelin it... I got to hear the version before soundclick and ur vocals sounded perfect on that shit... I dunno why they so low now... but yea doggie keep doin it... new thirdself tracks comin soon
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Old 12-14-04, 12:54 PM   #9
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This track was great, your delivery and voice is one of a kind man, i like how your voice/ range goes up and down..nice emotion in this and i like the beat as well..keep droppin man..1
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Old 12-14-04, 05:35 PM   #10
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thanks for the feed ya and yes thirdself is COMIN
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Old 12-14-04, 05:58 PM   #11
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This is the best I heard from you quality an spitting wise, I don't know what u was doing on the chorus tho....I wasn't feeling that at all.....the sample on choirus was too low an a weird sound followed it, I ono I really ain't like dat, but the energy u opened wit was ill...but halfway thru 1st verse u lost that energy u started wit, the second verse picked up tho, an u closed out nice....I was feeling the verses..it was a nice brag track...jus dat chorus was working but aside from dat nice.....stay up.....1
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Old 12-14-04, 08:30 PM   #12
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its ight wasnt really feelin the best nice flow and shit though i think you should stay with the gritty hard shit though but i did peep whatcha want from me and thats on the a.i album next month for sho thats fucking fire
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Old 12-14-04, 09:53 PM   #13
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Wats good... U asked me to check it out..so im peepin now..

Beats funky as hell... i fuck with it....

Mic quality is decent but if you upped the quality a bit it would help alot

Your voice is hott... flow is butter... Nice energy....

Im not feelin that hook... Sounds like a beat switch or some shit..Didnt mesh with song...

You def got somethin here...Sounds a little rough... but im feelin it..ill peep more in the future.. Stay up.. PZ
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Old 12-16-04, 11:14 AM   #15
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good shit yall thx
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