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Voted For: Cannabarz

yea...vote goes to U...

U had betta flow..and punches..it was Weak..but it would be betta to Elevate...u can add some multis...but good up..man

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Voted For: Makeveli Trained

Aii This is How i feel

MT
from the first bar i knew that you had this clearly your first punch was betta than cannabarz punche"Z" all together...Your meta's were the only thing i think you lacked out on but your multi's and punchez made up for it....so i give you a
9/10

Cannabarz
Look mayne its not that i didnt like your verse its jus that u didnt come hard enought......you lacked strong punchez and personalz but your multi's and meta's were terrific.....but as i see it you clearly shouldve came alot much harder than you came .......sorry
6/10

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Voted For: Cannabarz

Makaveli Trained:
Watch as i expose this nigga as tha site's biggest whore
Givin weddin rings 2 generalz, tha only way he engages n war
Ok opener, decent wordplay
Id say ima win this, but thas more played than ya bar lines
N Cannabarz tried 2 throw BIG punches.....
....but failed 2 increase his FONT SIZE
Nice personal
Im seriously tired of this niggas shyt, so im gettin constipated
He thinks throwin hard 'punches' iz bein So-phis-ticated(Fist)
Ok wordplay here, good setup but punch wasn't that hard
Ill toss his weak lines n tha 'toilet'
......n show em how 2 'Can-a-bar'
Dude lives on tha net, so hes goin nowhere like walkin n tar
Blah, concept could've been worded a lot better
Im tha 1 wit tha hot bars so mayb we oughta switch names
Ya previous wins were wit noobs, so mayb u should b 'trained'
Weak...
I got this bitch shook, he dont think i c em' hidin n tha fog
U winnin this battle iz 'far-fetched' like a 'quarterback's dog'
Decent punch
Y iz he still battlin n FL if hes supposed ta b a vet
He's scared of a challenge cuz he dont wanna lose his net rep
Weak attempt at personal, could've been worded better
Better believe it when i say that i will shyt on u
I already won this battle, dont start ta think it's a fluke
Self-gorification = wack...
U may b 20-1, but my record's better, dog im undefeated(lol)
Ur tha wackest dude here, n i dont think it needs 2 b repeated
Weak punch
This dude jus finished gettin regulated by 'Warren G'
Cuz u 'broke easily', i hope u came wit a 'warranty'
Setup was wack, punch was aight. Better wording in setup could've improved this bar a lot.

Cannabarz:
I'm The evilest-shrink! ..Your feeblish-winks! will leave you repo'd-and-twinked!..
mightaswell get 20-losses cuz, only way u reachin barz is if ya losses is legal-to-DRINK!!..
Good multis here, nice meta too...good opener
Your not even high or equal! pussy. your just jealous my fashion arrives so evil!!!
and your Hopes are Down! so heres some flowers, u can put it' beside-his-ego!!! ..
Nice...
knives or eagles? ..no-Use.!! . Your flows, duke? Your just A MAGGOT MAN!!! ...
might aswell get married! ..because drivin that get-a-way car is the only way ya Draggin-CANZ!!..
Lol a little self-glory, but not enough for me to complain. nice meta
fucking tupac-wannabe, like HONESTLY ...your fucking snoring yo..
i guess this isnt the only thing coming out of the closet since ya BORING FLOWS! ..
This one didn't hit that hard though...
tore this hoe, he actually thinks that hes stuck-the-best! ..
intell my punchlines rip THUG LIFE right off his fucking-chest! ..
Ok personal, punch didn't hit much though...
Intell nothing but rust is left, It's easy, you'll get a KNOCKED FACE!!! ..
this fags on TU's dick so much, if i punched him,he'd shit out PAC TAPES!!! ...
Ok closer, could've been worded better for a more successful punch

Winner: Cannabarz, for harder punches and better wordplay. Makaveli you got some potential, you just gotta keep elevating and you'll get better. I just think Can took you on this one.
Return the vote there VvvV honest and explained please
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