aiight nice lil intro....like the whispering thing very nice...1st emcee aiight delivery is ok could use more emotion...you sound like u rushed this and didnt take ya time try using punch ins to perfect different parts and get them right...lyrics r kinda simple could use more complex and deep lines....chorus was ok.......2nd emcee slightly better then the first the echo thing is mad annoying man and ruins it production is kinda weak lyrics could use more punch lines more multis over dubs not back but the echo add libs think r off man way off......liek the effects on the chorus though......3rd emcee theres no emotion in his flow and delivery lyrics r mad simple try more multis more punch lines and practice ya mixing for ya production coz production was lacking.....