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| ..Exponent.. |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
| .Aeral. |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
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12-17-04, 04:26 PM
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.Aeral. vs ..Exponent..
IP: AE2B 0274
4 bars/ 8 lines..
..No gay votes g'd luck.. 1 I'll drop today.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-20-04 at 04:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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12-17-04, 04:27 PM
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#2
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IP: AE2B 0274
.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 04:27 PM.
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12-17-04, 05:53 PM
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#3
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IP: BF48 F001
..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 05:53 PM.
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12-17-04, 06:06 PM
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Home Of Philly
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IP: BF48 F001
Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen) ~1~ |
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12-18-04, 01:45 PM
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IP: 1E1E A564
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love
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12-18-04, 01:46 PM
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IP: 1E1E A564
your in/ urine.. don't get the punches, go play with yourself...
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12-18-04, 01:51 PM
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#7
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Home Of Philly
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IP: A063 529A
Bout Time Damn...Iight Uppin This Battle Fa Honest Votes No D/r's Please!!!!!!!
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12-18-04, 01:56 PM
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Banned: Biting
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This was feedback posted for ..Exponent..
IP: 93C0 D1DD
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12-20-04, 01:35 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: ..Exponent..
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky... ..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI DECENT OPENER You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression PRETTY DECENT Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist NO…… Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love HEH, DECENT CLOSER NEXT Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard.. He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. DECENT OPENER No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. NICE PUNCHLINE Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. DECENT PUNCH Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word.. DECENT CLOSER overall I think Ex came a little harder cuz Aeral skrewed up on 1 line…but anyway Ex gets my vote on this 1
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12-20-04, 11:09 PM
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..I'm Back..
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: ..Exponent..
Ex Good Structure Nice Going, The Flow Was Tight, Still No Rhyme Scheme But You'll Get It Sooner Or Later... Add More Punches And Personals, Multis And Metas...Good Verse Dopeness......8/10 Areal First Off Your Structure Was Fuck It Was Chatoic I Couldnt See Where Your Bars End, Those Dotted Line Wasn't Working. Add More Punches Personals Came Weeker You Can Do Better, Mutis Was Needed Here Too..................................
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12-21-04, 03:15 AM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP: 7358 D119
Voted For: ..Exponent..
exponent........ Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard.. He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. lol....shit actually made me laugh a lil bit....7/10 No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. hmm....didnt like it too much....didnt hit too hard 3/10 Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. Decent....work on wordplay some......5/10 Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen) ok personal.....2nd line wasnt too great.....5/10 Aeral....... Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky... ..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI hmm ok opener....ok meta.....6/10 (could have been worded better) You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression didnt like the first line....2nd line was ok...5/10 Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist not feeling this at all....didnt rhyme well.....2/10 Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love sex jokes are played........3/10 exponent.....20/40.....decent...could have came harder but i guess you didnt have to....i felt like his punches hit harder...his structure was better.....overall it was just a better verse... Aeral......16/20......couple of bars were played....couple of lines were ok....practice being more consistent..... |
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12-21-04, 03:16 AM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP: 7358 D119
i meant to say aeral was 16/40.......lol not 20............my bad
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12-22-04, 05:23 PM
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IP: 603F 0D69
lol, was his verse that good.. & goliath?, I think you're Zeke, some dickrydin huh?.. whatever, idc...
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12-22-04, 05:45 PM
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#14
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.:Comin In With A Bang:.
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: .Aeral.
Good battle overall Aeral had bad structure...Ok flow not bad at all...Punches where hitting most of the time...Vocab was aight...Personals where pretty good...and ya Multis where not very good...Overall good job to you Ex had a better structure...pretty good flow...Had alright punches seen better from you...Vocab was aight...Multis was not there....and ya personals where weak...pretty ood job not bad seen better from you v/Aeral
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FREE AGENT Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition, I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin, The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin.... Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin, Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin...... |
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12-22-04, 05:49 PM
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.:Comin In With A Bang:.
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IP: 0825 899A
return the favor: Coopa Bang vs 3x.............Coopa Bang vs KKKHater.....Coopa Bang vs Ike.....thank you and have a nice day
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FREE AGENT Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition, I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin, The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin.... Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin, Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin...... |
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