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Check in by: 12-15-04 at 11:44 PM

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ol'dirtymexican has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 11:15 PM.

..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 11:19 PM.

seperate tha weak from tha obselete
itz hard 2 beat dem b-mor streets
itz on nigga fuck all dat bickerin beef
i can hear tha sweat trickelin down ya cheek
ya heart beat sound like sasquach feet
burn slo like blunts wit yayo
peal mo skin than idaho potato
niggaz kno tha lyrical melestin in takin place
wit tha odm fo sho it aint fake
make they skin chafe
rashes on they asses
bumps n bruises
lunts n land cruizas
ol' dirty smash fools n bash crews
make niggaz mad cuz they kno dat cash rules
everything around me got two glock nines
fo any muthafucka whisperin bout mines
Dawf dis iz b-mores finest
and fo u whinaz
cherry hill iz where u find us

Look Ol Dirty Get Ready To A Dandy Loss..
This Nigga Wants 2 Be A Viking,But His Style I Cant "Catch" Like Randy Moss..
Im Ova Ya Lack Of Grammer And Punctuation Like A English Teacher..
You Won't Make It Big Or Ya Penis Eitha..
Hittin With Harder Punches Than Ali
On Aim He Wass Huggin Mih Dick Like Tigh Briefs..
I Hit U In Ya Head And Make Ya Life Freeze..
He Eats More Meat Than Fat White Peeps..

HaHa This Wass Wack Ass Hell But Owell Onli 15 Minutes 2 Spit.....~1~

Voted For: ..Exponent..

OlDirtyMexican:
well you have a bad stucture but a good flow with weak punchlines that dont mix with any wordplay..use witty metaphores and you might so some damage also mix soem punchlines in there becuz you didnt have anything to be honest...a beaver could eat you...jk

Exponent:
hmm for a newbies it not to great your stucture was mad off...and your vocab was pretty good i cant say vocab was weak..but you also need to work on punchlines...iight then you might do something...but you won this fo sho easly...just leaving soem good feed for yall

return as explained vote in my battle verse socrates or epic links are in the sig...peace

ayo, i gotta go with my b-more boy oldirtymexican. both the flows were good, but mex had the best start.

Voted For: ..Exponent..

the only reason Ex gets my vote is cause the dorty mexican didn't even have one punchline!!!
tip to you ol' dirty next time use some dissin!!
return tha favor~1~

Voted For: ..Exponent..

this was a weak battle but exponent took it...
opener:tie
punches:exponent
wordplay:exponent
flowl' dirty mexican
vocab:exponent
closer:exponent
this was an overall weak battle but here is the reasons of my deccisions

oldirtymexican: you had a terrible opener, okay punches, bad structure,and a bad ending.....it didnt come hard enough...it did have a good flow though

exponent:also had a bad opener..okay punches...structure was better than mexican's but still not good..vocab was better than dirty's but still not good...also had an okay ending

both:need to improve on ya'lls structure, vocab, punches...basically just elevate a lil of everything.....especially try to work on ya'lls structure and wordplay, and punches....

v/..exponent..

Voted For: ..Exponent..

my Vote goes..to Exponent....

he came alot harder wit da flow...i doubt he even tried..it was a weak battle..........

punches.......was da main..thing

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