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12-20-04, 11:17 AM | #1 | ||||
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Godly Hands, Scooping The Blessed, Welcoming Humble Figure's. As Sanity Is Rekindled, But Corruption Potentially Wreak's & Linger's. Role's Inflamed By Those Trying To Regain Manipulation, & Lifes. Including Those Without Job's, Home's, Children, Or Even Wife's. Entangling Those ith Belief's, Thinking God Has Given Them This Dream. Bond's Are Broken Daily, Weak Link's Are Attached By Loving Seam's. So It Seem's, God Wish's Your'e Life To Be Filled With Deceit & Despair. But... If He Wanted That, Then You'd Be Entysed Within Satan's Lair. Where Minion's Entangle You In Torture, Lock You Up & Receive Beating's. While Church, Emit's Belief's To Mind's, & God Welcome's You With a Greeting. Enemy's Trying To Sink Your Good Will, Just Counter The Seedy Underground's. Salvage Your Bond's, Connection's, Be The One, Who's Reflection Stain's The Lord's Crown. Find Your Inner Strength, For The Church Is A Harbour For Those Seeking a Purpose. Never Set Yourself Short Goal's, Reach Out & Succeed In The Satisfaction, Of Going Furthest. Senior Figure's Will Watch You, But Just To Guide The Way Thru The Pain. Your Mind Be Refreshed By God's Will's, Through Anticipation In The Rain. Just Remember, Do Not Recoil At The One's Trying To Make A Living & Progress. With These Word's, Inspire Interaction Between Individual's, Let It Erode Time, & Caress. |
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12-20-04, 11:36 AM | #2 | ||||
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Can We Get Some Feedback In Here...
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12-20-04, 12:19 PM | #3 | ||||
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12-20-04, 01:58 PM | #4 | ||||
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Upping For Feed People.
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12-21-04, 02:10 AM | #5 | |||
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good stuff man...definitely one of the better drops i've seen here.
wording was grood, i liked your choices throughout along with the appropriate vocab; it kept the message nice and clear Which by the way was also a strong point here. I'm assuming the title refers to one's inner strength? that courageous person we have inside that we never knew existed until we start believing in ourselves. And really to me the piece reflected this too along with our doubts about our faith, life, and relationships between people, as well as ourself of course i could be totally off but that's my interpretation regardless it was good, much props and i hope you keep dropping here -peace alias? from another site? Last edited by George K.Stanza : 12-21-04 at 03:28 AM. |
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12-22-04, 05:15 AM | #6 | |||||
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Not An Alias From Another Site, But Upping, Thanks For The Feed.
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