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Old 12-11-04, 05:55 AM   #1
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Woman,Fam,Reflection

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...Woman,Fam.,Reflection...

Shit..I wish..All three would just mix..I shouldn't just pick..
sometimes I get so stress..contest.. and say fuck this..
I'll admit..when making music..and family abusins..the cruelest
women..at the bottom' of the list..no my woman don't gotta be mixed..
nor no type of Hue..color..but why do they always gotta be pissed..
take a second to breath..they keep gasping.take 2 seconds to leave..
they don't even reckon to think..its always the same thing..heaven or peace..
no one's perfect..there's ones still searching..one's always cursin..
and the one who's questioning you..or if you are worth it..Yes..
Indeph look at chest..but with my ex..that's not why I took her for..
call me lame..but looks not what I'm looking for..a different sorce..
I don't want girls who want intercorse..how about one's who kiss on porch..
I don't want girls to suck on the rod..that's not why I'm fishin for..
Showing the female my home...maybe at the room..I end the tour..
One more time..I'm in the game..I aint in to score..lose the form..
I want care..I care about your mind,..not your uniform...

(beat plays as chorus)


This why I hate thanksgiving..Uncle cuss when his team aint winning
the bears never do..dude you gotta expect the same ending.wait in it
sit between my aunt and Unc..when they argue.. and they follow you..
how you never there when they callin you..I send my sis to stall you..
all true..cousin joe slash jane..why you make the Doc Repaul you..
have you know shame..now you lost your game..don't it apaul you?..
Grapma C...H-A-R-L-E....S...why everytime I'm there you stress..
when the lil babies come around..the yelling..you do less?thats a quest..
the question..what you only do best..I get bad grades only to test..
why you think I'm in a gang..I dunno guns..well...only a teck..thats it..
I know with sports I need practice..football passing..basketball baskets..
I'd happy relaxing..sorry the fact is...You all jump on my nervs.and sleep
you juggle my mind..my family..the reason that my work is neat...

(beat plays as chorus)


Look at this dude..think he cool..standing in the mirror
I keep tryin to see the glass..but this body interfering
wearing du rags..don't even got waves...wearing a jesus chain
he aint even got saved..he aint even aware of god's day
all he do is rap..all he talk about..is what he put into his tracks
came from Chicago..he wanna be moving back..he complain..
all he do is that..teach the facts..you can't rap..
all your punchliens he be repeating back..with his jersey on..
I said you not G'd up..I think this freshman heard me wrong..
his dumbass took a 29 question test..and got thirty wrong..
dude tiny ear ring aint glistening..so small it'll make history..
I realise the screwup..this is me..And I was dissin me..peace..

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Old 12-11-04, 06:11 AM   #2
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please stop, step down for a bit. and let someone else take the spot light.

*goes back to following indeph around saying "werd" after all his post's.

4 real though, this is just another dope drop from you.
Proad to be repping with you man.
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Old 12-11-04, 06:17 AM   #3
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..sorry..I'll tell mods to close this...
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Old 12-11-04, 08:44 AM   #4
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hmmm wasn't bad I liked. .... Godd drop and G'luck.
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Old 12-11-04, 08:47 AM   #5
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legend i wanna battle.........
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Old 12-11-04, 09:19 AM   #6
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..sorry..I'll tell mods to close this...


Nope nope...this has to stay...

Again a nice drop, vocab was straight on (as usual), flow was good...But most important parts for me in an OM are wordplay and emotion (goes hand in hand tho)...and i was really feeling what u were saying, nice emotion, wordplay was good...overall nice drop! My favo part was the last verse...the way you built that up: dope!

7.9/10 hehe ...you kno im just kiddin...
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Old 12-11-04, 09:06 PM   #7
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Old 12-11-04, 09:14 PM   #8
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Damn Indeph, we on the same track of mind so much man.

Hope you get through your troubles man, get at me.

peace.
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Old 12-12-04, 02:58 PM   #9
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Old 12-12-04, 03:43 PM   #10
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dawg...STOP
dont take that tha wrong way guy. im just sayin dat everytime i read somethin of yours or somethin you on i feel tha same way. yo shit is straight fire man. 10/10

and i was jus wonderin...do you do anything hardcore? 4real...get back at me kid
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Old 12-12-04, 03:47 PM   #11
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lol..I did somethin like it a while back..

but my style is kinda like Nas and Jay mixed..

my next one'll be hardcore..you can probably be on it ..heheh..

get @ me
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Old 12-12-04, 03:56 PM   #12
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im feelin dat answer...i aint found my style yet. somethin like Royce da 5'9 and Obie Trice. dat thinker or stupid shit. feel me?
but bout dat hardcore track i'll be on tha remix of dat one when its up . i'll be lookin for it dawg
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Old 12-12-04, 03:59 PM   #13
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alright flow... it was pretty decent..
keep it up cuz...
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Old 12-24-04, 04:00 PM   #14
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Old 12-24-04, 04:02 PM   #15
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Personally I Liked it But others may feel diffrent bcuz ima Newb and shit
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