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12-16-04, 01:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
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da hood (bored)
IP: 6099 9647
Its da imfamous ruler the king terrell flow is sick been to the gates and seen hell.
The book and the pencil are death notes watch children smoke cigs taking death totes. Lining up the coke to sniff grab da splif for good times walk outside and get hit. I seen it all alot carin about high fashion rhymes i spit give a lyrical lashin kids in tha house playin games button mashin dealer cross the street drug stashin. Welcome 2 da hood the place that ruins dreamz full of sceamz everyone walkin around wit da beam ready to do whatever for the c.r.e.a.m and they team. this world is so happy so as it seemz. Alot walk outside they and the next day wake up in hospital gettin out of the hoodto and average human seems impossible not 2 mention hoes and armed robbers 2 cop da jewles ready 2 spit at you fools in some hoods you got the average pimp chillin wit hoes cocktail and eatin shrimp. Cursin arguing yelling and fightin try to release steam by writin maybe one day we can escape but soon as you make some one has to hate try to assasinate and then skate clap ya face now the memory of you in the hood is erased. vote da battle http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ht=livin-legend Last edited by livin-legend : 12-16-04 at 01:33 PM. |
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12-16-04, 06:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F978 BD6E
uppin for responses plz...........
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12-17-04, 01:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
can i get some responses plz..............................!
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12-20-04, 03:05 PM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
respond bitches mad people veiwing this but cant respond! 2 it ! damn
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12-20-04, 06:01 PM | #5 | |||||||
The King
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IP: A26E 4629
kinda bad flow and the lines were to long it would can you a minute to say one bar
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12-21-04, 01:38 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
okay pretty bad response follow open mic intructs ....! cmon
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12-24-04, 12:59 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD96 2091
uppin for some reponses...........!
vote da battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166259 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166112 |
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12-26-04, 08:28 PM | #8 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD96 2091
uppin for some responses plz............ some responses ......?.......!
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12-26-04, 08:49 PM | #9 | |||
Im..Nasty..
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IP: 12BB 668E
no one is going to respond because this shit was weak.
your flow was horrible, your concept, and your whole scheme was terrible. Please pick a new topic/concept, to write about.. thanks
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