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Old 12-16-04, 01:22 PM   #1
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da hood (bored)

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Its da imfamous ruler the king terrell flow is sick been to the gates and seen hell.

The book and the pencil are death notes watch children smoke cigs taking death totes.

Lining up the coke to sniff grab da splif for good times walk outside and get hit.

I seen it all alot carin about high fashion rhymes i spit give a lyrical lashin kids in tha house playin games button mashin dealer cross the street drug stashin.

Welcome 2 da hood the place that ruins dreamz full of sceamz everyone walkin around wit da beam ready to do whatever for the c.r.e.a.m and they team. this world is so happy so as it seemz.

Alot walk outside they and the next day wake up in hospital gettin out of the hoodto and average human seems impossible not 2 mention hoes and armed robbers 2 cop da jewles ready 2 spit at you fools

in some hoods you got the average pimp chillin wit hoes cocktail and eatin shrimp. Cursin arguing yelling and fightin try to release steam by writin

maybe one day we can escape but soon as you make some one has to hate try to assasinate and then skate clap ya face now the memory of you in the hood is erased.



vote da battle

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Old 12-16-04, 06:04 PM   #2
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uppin for responses plz...........
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Old 12-17-04, 01:19 PM   #3
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can i get some responses plz..............................!
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Old 12-20-04, 03:05 PM   #4
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respond bitches mad people veiwing this but cant respond! 2 it ! damn
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Old 12-20-04, 06:01 PM   #5
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kinda bad flow and the lines were to long it would can you a minute to say one bar
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Old 12-21-04, 01:38 PM   #6
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okay pretty bad response follow open mic intructs ....! cmon
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Old 12-24-04, 12:59 PM   #7
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Old 12-26-04, 08:28 PM   #8
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uppin for some responses plz............ some responses ......?.......!
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Old 12-26-04, 08:49 PM   #9
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no one is going to respond because this shit was weak.
your flow was horrible, your concept, and your whole scheme was terrible.

Please pick a new topic/concept, to write about.. thanks
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